Reviews for A Brother Divided
Mari Wollsch chapter 21 . 11/24
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Phillies2 chapter 19 . 11/18
it was a good story, but once he was pulled from the army it went downhill. I also think you forced the ginny relationship too much to where it would have been better with no ships. I did skim the last 8 chapters for the battle scenes, I just can't see Harry not trying to get back to his men. Also it acts as if Dumbledore or James have any say in the Army, I guess the minister does, but the Public outcry after the loss with the siege would have brought Harry back. I liked the idea of the story, I just think it could have been better
booklover 0711 chapter 21 . 9/22
absolutely amazing fic , I loved it.
bookieHP chapter 21 . 8/9
best fanfic i ever read in my life. luved this! thank u for writing this. write more...
bookieHP chapter 7 . 8/7
omg awsome story!
AvidReader1568 chapter 21 . 5/25
An absolutely amazing fic, definitely one of my favorites!
HarlequinBlu chapter 21 . 2/14
I cried when Neville turned evil and then again when he died. How do you write so emotionally?!
writingwithaquill chapter 21 . 1/9
I had really hoped that Neville could be saved but never mind! I still loved this story!
Gee chapter 5 . 12/28/2015
I just finished reading your story and I just wanted to tell you that it was beautifully written! There were so many feelings running through me throughout the story, the plot of the story was brilliant and there was not a moment in which I wasn't overcome by feelings of excitement and urges to know what was going to happen next! So basically I just wanted to say that it was a great story and I hope you keep on writing!
Lauren miranda chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
they are kids not even ten year olds think like that and they're supposed to be 6? please at least try to make it realistic and i hate Neville he would be so much better out of this story
Ariana Peverell chapter 21 . 11/14/2015
One of the best wbwl stories out there.
Somebody chapter 21 . 8/11/2015
A wonderful story but I would have liked to know, in a summary and less gross way, exactly what Voldemort did to Neville to break him. Your twist of the prophecy in the end was a really good idea and the battle was epic! Kudos~
ankaush chapter 16 . 7/22/2015
Interesting story, but could have been awesome if you had written it wiyh lil more depth. Also, is that blond hair thing inspired from super saiyan?
Guest chapter 10 . 7/18/2015
So far harry is just a lapdog for everyone
DarkDragon360 chapter 9 . 4/20/2015
Hmm...I keep getting a slight Dragon Ball Z vibe...
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