Reviews for A Brother Divided
SuperApplePie chapter 21 . 2/17
An interesting story with nice twists and turns, but many of the characters changed their way of thinking to fast, and Violet seemed a bit too one-dimensional. It really was a great story though.
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 2/11
this shit is stupid like wtf Harry is a bitch
TheWateringWizard chapter 4 . 3/31/2017
Ok so Harry is a Sayian?
TheWateringWizard chapter 3 . 3/31/2017
Okay I'm not a fan at all of Harry's wardrobe and his hairstyle is dreadful... Like absolutely ugly as crap
Creator176 chapter 21 . 1/1/2017
Ok, I loved this story, one of the best I've read. However, there's one thing I didn't enjoy about the end. Violet got basically no punishment at all at the end, I would've liked to see her get humiliated or at least get what she deserved. Being in a bad mood and having her parents treat her normally isn't exactly a good punishment for her. She practically tortured Harry for Christ's sake! And she told him to beg and scream! That's messed up and I was looking forward to seeing her get what she deserved! But, this was still a great story!
Mari Wollsch chapter 21 . 11/24/2016
super xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Phillies2 chapter 19 . 11/18/2016
it was a good story, but once he was pulled from the army it went downhill. I also think you forced the ginny relationship too much to where it would have been better with no ships. I did skim the last 8 chapters for the battle scenes, I just can't see Harry not trying to get back to his men. Also it acts as if Dumbledore or James have any say in the Army, I guess the minister does, but the Public outcry after the loss with the siege would have brought Harry back. I liked the idea of the story, I just think it could have been better
booklover 0711 chapter 21 . 9/22/2016
absolutely amazing fic , I loved it.
bookieHP chapter 21 . 8/9/2016
best fanfic i ever read in my life. luved this! thank u for writing this. write more...
bookieHP chapter 7 . 8/7/2016
omg awsome story!
AvidReader1568 chapter 21 . 5/25/2016
An absolutely amazing fic, definitely one of my favorites!
HarlequinBlu chapter 21 . 2/14/2016
I cried when Neville turned evil and then again when he died. How do you write so emotionally?!
Lionheart543 chapter 21 . 1/9/2016
I had really hoped that Neville could be saved but never mind! I still loved this story!
Gee chapter 5 . 12/28/2015
I just finished reading your story and I just wanted to tell you that it was beautifully written! There were so many feelings running through me throughout the story, the plot of the story was brilliant and there was not a moment in which I wasn't overcome by feelings of excitement and urges to know what was going to happen next! So basically I just wanted to say that it was a great story and I hope you keep on writing!
Lauren miranda chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
they are kids not even ten year olds think like that and they're supposed to be 6? please at least try to make it realistic and i hate Neville he would be so much better out of this story
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