Reviews for Two
Romancelover1321 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I get it. Sasuke comes back from Orochimaru and Sakura is getting married but she is having an affair with Sasuke, minus the sleeping with him, even though thats what affair means. Good job.
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
It was well written and everything! I love it! Adding this to my favs.
nothing but blue chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
interesting. but sad. i liked it though. great job! :D
100wishes chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
'You do not think.

You do not want to think.'

Seriously, I don't want to think either.

This is making me a bit confuzzled, but it's just so amazingly awesome that I just have to forgive you for making myself feel a bit dumb.

You know, at first I was heartbroken 'cause she marries someone else and I was actually contemplating on jumping off the cliff of my mental planet but then you went on to say 'She is married today, but she is still your’s' and suddenly, everything was alright.

'Cause as much as Sasuke is an ass sometimes, SasuSaku is just so perfect it's not even funny anymore.

Good job!
ish.the.abstract chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
it is confusing but comprehensible at the same time, I view this as philosophical what with things that are beyond love and beyond human comprehension...it's also written exactly as it should have been, your execution is amazing, repetition is utilized well and it's very sensational and sweet in its own way

~ish
Melitza chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wow. Absolutely like a punch in the gut - so utterly heart-wrenching, the way they go at such different paces (just a chapter in her's... she's his best friend but he is not hers...) Utterly amazing description of the discrepancy, and I can almost feel the poignancy like acid in the gut.

Fantastic. Utterly fantastic - and the description of how their relationship is "beyond" is to incomprehensible, and yet profound... well. It's just fantastic. I love it. (Though I would love to see them together, too... but, well, you say - they are kinda-sorta-always-forever-together, in their own different way.)

*Romantic, heartbroken sigh*
SAILORMERCY chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
loved loved loved it. it was angsty, romantic, tragic, n dramatic lol simply awesome. I didn't find it confusing. I think personally u protrayed them perfectly. I can truly believe them having a connection beyond love. great job
BananaphoneBob chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Aww! Is it wrong that I didn't find it confusing? Oh well, I loved it anyway! It was beyond sweet! WAY beyond sweet! Loved it so much ... and I could imagine it all happening! I feel sorry for the guy she just married though. Oh well, she chose the better person :D

-x-Emma-x-
kerapal bubbles chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
i...am so confused. so, does she marry sasuke at the end? DX GAH! IM CONFUSED! EXPLAIN!
frumpyrox chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
i luvd this, actually. the confusion (it wasnt, really) gave it a surreal effect. the sorta jotty sentences, thoughts, descriptions, they were perfect. u did a great job with this. how u explaind their "not love" love was amazing and i nevr really thot of it like tht before. a deepr love thn marriage.. wow, it really gave me a new perspective, really.

again, this was beautiful, continue writing, my friend;]

happy unbirthday

-frumpyrox
extraordinaire chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
I actually really didn't think this was confusing, but in fact truly beautiful. And I loved how their love wasn't really love at all, but something deeper. Because Sasuke and Sakura are obviously made for each other!

(sorry, excuse the fangirling)

But anyways, I loved how when they held each other, it made his life, but it was only a chapter for her. It was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. Great job!
Brix chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
So she married someone else? Why? Aren't they in love with each other? Or is it lust? Ah, so many questions that swarm in my mind!

I loved it! Woo! It's confusing, nut that's the fun part of reading it and re-reading it. To try and see what's underneath!

Have a cookie
AGENT KELL chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
it's... supposed to be confused, but it's so utterly beautiful!

i mean, yeah. it sounds/reads really pretty. really pretty.

:D
Anearin chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
m confusing... twists and turns aplenty... sad in places, but really quite good. For a while there I was wondering whether or not they were actually going to end up together but somehow, not sure how but somehow it worked :)

Anea