Reviews for Harry Potter and the Imprisonment
AnimeNerdX chapter 1 . 9/9
Dumbledork would have had to explain to me how a lightning bolt scar could be made by a piece of class fallen on a babies head like...
JadeSpeedster17 chapter 10 . 8/3
I've read a lot of fanfiction, while this story started out creative and interesting. The ending chapters seemed very rushed. Leaving out important info in favor of just mindless blood and gore.
The ending... I'll be honest, made no sense what so ever. I would have thought Harry would have gone with Angelia or whoever her name was in the end. Instead, he became a nightmare? Why? It makes no sense. As you didn't explain Nightmare's that much or how one becomes a Nightmare. And Olivander? Why is he not a Nightmare?

The story kept me interesting, until about the 8th or 9th chapter, and things just kind of fell apart.

All and all, it was an okay story, but for future reference, please try to give to your readers more details and keep the blood and gore where it is needed and out of where it is not needed.
setokayba2n chapter 11 . 5/22
Not good, not bad, it leave it very open, not to say strange things like Granger overcoming the potion.

Waiting to see the redo or if you make a sequel.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/27
You clearly have no business writing fiction. This story was as retarded as it gets. There was no background and no character sketching. Merely writing rubbish in author notes does make for a definition. Revenge fics are welcome when they're written well, not when they're written people who don't know the first thing about creating writing. I literally felt my IQ points dropping as I struggled to absorb this heap of stupidity.
The only good thing is that you stopped when you did. _/\_
Jiya04 chapter 11 . 4/22
Nice story but it was all so confusing... I liked the story but didn't understand everything. Great story though...
DarkEvilBloodySadist chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
spelled lily not lilly
Guest chapter 3 . 12/19/2016
That's an adultes, non logiciel story
WolfStar4Ev chapter 10 . 11/2/2016
The Story Was Great! It Was...It Just Seemed A Bit...Rushed At The End.
Sorry, but that's just my thoughts.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/5/2016
I don't get it, Harry become a slave or not? The part with nightmare was so confusing...
tina.maki chapter 11 . 1/21/2016
Interesting fic. Sooo verry sad, Harry used to be such a nice/good person and was broken...
Btw, isn't the fic rating a bit off?
HealingRose2 chapter 2 . 10/24/2015
This confuses me a lot. I have a reading disability so the wording of all of this makes my head hurt. I'm just going to stop reading because I have no idea what's going on and why certain things happen.
Melissa the kawaii yandere chapter 10 . 8/29/2015
*blink* Wow, so Harry's dead?
I should've expected that, I guess XD
Melissa the kawaii yandere chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
TF
Harry's the boy who lived, nuuu! XO
NatNatWriter chapter 2 . 8/10/2015
I love this fanfiction so much I am reading it again!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/22/2015
Yes, Justin, the Boy-Who-Lived-Because-His-Brother-Is-So-Much-More-Awesome-Than-Him
And Harry, the Boy-Who-Actually-Lived-But-Everyone-Around-Him-Is-An-Idiot
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