|Reviews for Clarity|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I absolutly LOVED it
| Cool fanatic chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
This was amazing. I loved it!
| Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Beautiful! :) Well done.
| Yvaughn chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
What a lovely look at a scene we only get from Bella's pov. I love J&A's quiet devotion. Thank you for sharing that!
| twilightdork13 chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Okay, let me just make this clarification before I continue, this is absolutely NOTHING like The Jake/Renesmee imprinting. It is so much better.
A. Because the Jake/Nessie thing was so disturbing. Sorry if you disagree/
B. Because you described emotions so perfectly, much better than Meyer could ever do...
C. I absolutely love Jasper and Alice together, they are so perfect!
So, there you have it. Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!
Oh, and sorry for reviewing all your posts... but I read one of your stories and couldn't help myself except to look at the rest and they are just so great... :)
| OliviaJane chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
To bad we didn't get to know the Cullens like that in BD.
I felt completely Cullen deprived after reading it.
Great Jasper POV by the way. :)
| rosemary tea chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
wow that was wow
| rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
this is very touching & sweet
| tuesdaysonthephonetome chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Sigh. That's beautiful. I love Alice/Jasper oh so very much (I actually just recently wrote my own version of this part - and some parts previous to it - of New Moon only from Alice's perspective). I think you captured the emotion gloriously. Very very well done, bravo.
| Just A Realistic Dreamer chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Aww... (not very original, am I?)
I've read BD but I wouldn't have noticed the similarity, don't worry about it.
| theartistformerlyknownaswmlaw chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Aaw, that's beautiful!
| EverydayBeautiful05 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
AW... that was so cute!