Reviews for Out the Door
HappyDeathFairy chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I like Chouji a lot and therefore I like this a lot but the last line "She will make him regret it." really made me open my eyes! That took me by surprise, which I think is a good thing!
OCQueen chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
? Your thinking is to deep for my normal brain to handle... can you explain what the heck happened here?
coconutmandarin chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
"Shikamaru wants him to cloud watch and Ino wants him to weight watch."

Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Interesting, good vocabulary choices for the pairing. I liked this.
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
interesting...alittle weird..but interesting..

overlordofnobodies chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Very very nice. It's angst like you said but it still sweet.
theREvamped chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
That was a trite confusing, and so SHORT!

However, even with only 200 WORDS! you make Chouji such a sweetheart whom everyone takes for granted. Shame shame.

"...and she will die not noting". That was THE most powerful line in the entire blurb. And you practically hid the poor line. Shame on you!
Ghettogurl94'Llane2 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
m...I see! (doesn't, really.)
FadingMoonlight chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
I liked it. It made so much sense and was nicely done. But i just have to say I don't really understand the ending...though that's not to bad seeing as I have a story where I don't even understand my ending. :)