|Reviews for Giving In|
| Awsaya chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Oh, I'm so jealous!
I greatly enjoyed this oneshot and am also kind of clueless as to why I've never come across this before (I can't quite remember if I was reading fanfiction in 2008), but I'm ecstatic that I can at least read and reread it now. The writing was very descriptive, sensual, and rushed in a way that created believably adequate tension between Sasuke and Sakura. So well done! I hope you decide to write more in the future if you find the time.
| uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I love it! Great job.
I reckon this deserves more reviews...
| Kaze and Kiba chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Interesting fic. It would be even better if there was more dialogue, spoken or thought. And you should give your dialogue it's own line, instead of lumping it in the paragraphs. It has more punch that way.
I would slow down the love scenes, they were kind of rushed, especially for a couple of virgins, it seemed like they were pretty darn experienced-but it's your story. Good descriptives. You should write more-I like happy endings with Sas/Sak.
Thanks for the story.
| xtintin chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Nice welcoming gift.
| Twinnet chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
| renyun chapter 1 . 8/5/2008