Reviews for A Simple Twist of Fate
Ninkita chapter 17 . 12/30/2016
Yay, they finally talked!
Ninkita chapter 12 . 12/30/2016
Ahh that's right, listen to the girls!
Ninkita chapter 11 . 12/30/2016
Uh oh, I can see how B's feeling insecure...
Ninkita chapter 9 . 12/30/2016
Ahh they are on the same page, more or less... nice!
Ninkita chapter 8 . 12/30/2016
Uh oh, that got dangerous, but at least Edward got his hero moment
Ninkita chapter 6 . 12/30/2016
Well, you learn something new everyday, i guess... and the moonlight striptease was hot
Ninkita chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
Well, that's one way to shop... i hope the couch isn't too hard!
Ninkita chapter 4 . 12/30/2016
Hmm nice :)
Ninkita chapter 3 . 12/30/2016
Woah, that's going to hurt in the morning! And Jake needs to curb it.
Ninkita chapter 2 . 12/30/2016
lol... that went well :D
Ninkita chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
Oh I like the visuals this chapter gave me.
jk chapter 11 . 5/15/2016
LOL drama drama drama...this is what pathetic clingy girls do! she has sex with him, he gets a text and all of a sudden he "lying" to her...messing with her heart...LOL
later he gets a phone call, leaves to have some privacy and she leaves fucking crying? seriously?
god bella just shoot yourself...your way to pathetic
jk chapter 10 . 5/15/2016
its kinda pathetic that bella already said she oves him...and shes already getting bitchy about his ex's...stop being so god damned pathetic bella
jk chapter 6 . 5/15/2016
what the fuck? she asked his "number" he says don't judge me...then doesn't fucking tell her? we need to know how much of a fucking whore he is!

what was that bullshit about bella never having a orgasm...she was dating her friend...surely they were comfortable enough to talk and make that shit happen

I hate when Edwards a whore and bellas not experienced...fuck that
Guest chapter 2 . 7/8/2015
Unrealistic
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