|Reviews for A Simple Twist of Fate|
| hannahmom16 chapter 16 . 4/27/2009
Ironically, I was just thinking of this story the other day. I couldn't remember the title but I could remember the plot and just knew that I had forgotten to put it on Story Alert because I hadn't gotten any updates. Needless to say, in the mess that is FF, I couldn't find it. Then, yipee!, an update in my box today; I did put it on alert. I love this chapter. I grew up in Central Florida and went to college in Jacksonville and lived there a few years after I graduated as well. You perfectly described how it feels at the beach. Dripping the water up your arms in the ocean, the after noon rain showers. You just really brought some super great memories for me.
| mamato chapter 16 . 4/27/2009
Finally! Please update again SOON! Good lead in to the conversation!
| Sheeijan chapter 16 . 4/27/2009
Welcome back! And here I thought this story was dead and I was about to remove it from my list. Coolness! I'm glad that I'm wrong. Bells being rational about her situation is nice to see. Somtimes I get so tired of meek and mild Bella in fanfics. Thanks for the update!
| Sapphire Mizu chapter 16 . 4/27/2009
WELCOME BACK! And I do say, I would have slapped you for making me wait ths long. [ Though I can't blame you when you mentioned thebrain juice running dry. So anyway, GREAT CHAPTER! (Even though I've forgotten like half the story P) UPDATE AND GET THOSE BRAIN JUICES WORKING D
| azure0610 chapter 14 . 4/18/2009
You have GOT to be kidding me! The music took over this chapter. Why? It's not THAT important. Now we'll never get a reunion
| azure0610 chapter 12 . 4/18/2009
She let out a loud, bell like laugh. "Honey, I am on Bella's side. She wants you just as much as you want her, she just needs a little nudge, is all." She patted my knee and bounced out of the car. I heard the back door open and slam shut and was startled; I'd completely forgotten Jasper had been in the car listening the entire time.
ROTFLMAO! I totally forgot about Jasper too.
I'm sorry but the miscommunication was ridiculous to me and I don't like it being prolonged.
THIS Bella is a different Bella than usual. And she could very well go running to Jake for a good fuck just to numb the pain. She does run to guys after a fight with another guy.
Him not immediately going to her was EXTREMELY stupid. There is NO reason to wait! 24 hours can change alot of crap. Hell in between breakfast and the beach the next day she could have gone to Jake, then got back together with Edward the next day then in 2 months find out she's pregnant by Jake. There was NO reason to wait.
| azure0610 chapter 9 . 4/18/2009
Aww shit! Not the ILY after sex! WHY!
| azure0610 chapter 8 . 4/18/2009
Don't cockblock them anymore please!
| azure0610 chapter 7 . 4/18/2009
Wait, in chapter one Bella said sex with Jake was incredible
Oh I can't wait for Bull's. I sense PossessiveWard is about to say hello. Probably due to a Mike perhaps?
| azure0610 chapter 6 . 4/18/2009
Nice! Loved the lemon.
I'm a little scared to look up the red wings thing now.
| azure0610 chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
Edward's bed was JUST like I pictured. That was ridiculously sexy
| azure0610 chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
Wow! No Bella no, don't get THAT drunk into front of potential hottie boyfriend
| azure0610 chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
.GOD thank you SO much! I already have Jake number one on my hit list as always in stories. But thank you for not making him a douche. Lovely!
| azure0610 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Oh I just love this. I kinda wish Kayla was Tanya though. I like when it's book characters.
SO far I'm liking Bella. Not fond of tattoos. Bella doesn't seem like a tattoo girl no matter how her personality is written.
BUT poor Edward, semi cockblocked by Emmett. Now don't tell me Alice is already with Jasper and her and Bella are going to be at the club?
| mytai chapter 8 . 4/1/2009
i didn't realise i was holding my breath until i started to breath again...lol. brilliant.