Reviews for A Simple Twist of Fate
australianvamp chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
geez that was so hot... keep up the fluf

great now i need a shower
Sinful Seduction chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
ah, ha ha ha. I liked these chapters.
robyn chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
First of all, good inspiration music wise. second of all I LOL"D AND LOVED! srsly, so damn good. can't wait for the next!
Night script chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
whoa... nice... I like the shopping trip the most... that was hot... lol...
orangeblossom626 chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I would have died on that bed, lol.

Oh and I loved your comment about Southerners being eager to please, I truly had to stifle a laugh at 3:30 in the morning.

Thanks for updating ;)
Renee Spelt Strange chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
ahaha. Edward's POV of this chapter is funny.

M, his shoe size is 13. Nice. Lol.

Update soon.
sakurarwr chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I enjoyed the wit in this chapter. Update soon :D
Bezzaletta chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Love the shopping trip! best ever! love the flirting!

bezzie:)
Carden88 chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Yeah shopping with Edward like that wouldn't be such a bad thing.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
spritegirl24 chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Haha...Edward and Bella trying to one-up each other in the furniture store was too hilarious.
kuntrygal chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
Love it! Cant wait to read more!
sweetswirlypop chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
I like both of your Edward and Bella. They have some sort of strong impact. Great start! And your lemondrops were great. ;)
frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
love it! love how you didnt make jake a bad guy. UPDATE SON!

-A :)
dress up romance xx chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
O! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! LOVED IT ]
wretched witch chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
Bella and Edward are goind furniture shopping :D Yay :) Great chapter, I liked it )

Yours, Gabby
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