|Reviews for A Simple Twist of Fate|
| australianvamp chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
geez that was so hot... keep up the fluf
great now i need a shower
| Sinful Seduction chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
ah, ha ha ha. I liked these chapters.
| robyn chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
First of all, good inspiration music wise. second of all I LOL"D AND LOVED! srsly, so damn good. can't wait for the next!
| Night script chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
whoa... nice... I like the shopping trip the most... that was hot... lol...
| orangeblossom626 chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I would have died on that bed, lol.
Oh and I loved your comment about Southerners being eager to please, I truly had to stifle a laugh at 3:30 in the morning.
Thanks for updating ;)
| Renee Spelt Strange chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
ahaha. Edward's POV of this chapter is funny.
M, his shoe size is 13. Nice. Lol.
| sakurarwr chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I enjoyed the wit in this chapter. Update soon :D
| Bezzaletta chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Love the shopping trip! best ever! love the flirting!
| Carden88 chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Yeah shopping with Edward like that wouldn't be such a bad thing.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| spritegirl24 chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Haha...Edward and Bella trying to one-up each other in the furniture store was too hilarious.
| kuntrygal chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
Love it! Cant wait to read more!
| sweetswirlypop chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
I like both of your Edward and Bella. They have some sort of strong impact. Great start! And your lemondrops were great. ;)
| frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
love it! love how you didnt make jake a bad guy. UPDATE SON!
| dress up romance xx chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
O! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! LOVED IT ]
| wretched witch chapter 4 . 8/8/2008
Bella and Edward are goind furniture shopping :D Yay :) Great chapter, I liked it )