Reviews for Just How Far I've Fallen
Unishibi Moriko chapter 7 . 2/28/2010
This chapter was good but one thing bothered me. You said that after Sasori left the kitchen, Pein ran out since he didn't want to clean up. But then at the end you have Pein and Konan in the kitchen.. Wha'?... When did he go back in there? o.O

-Moriko
Dominican Kitsune chapter 10 . 11/30/2008
That was an awesome ending! And it screams sequel too!
with eyes looking up chapter 10 . 11/26/2008
that was possibly the best ending you've written. i loved it. :)

a sequel would be love, i assure you. :D

great job!
Sailor Pandabear chapter 9 . 11/21/2008
interesting
My-Sanity-Went-B00m chapter 9 . 11/18/2008
OMG DEIDARA YAY!

Ahem, it was very good.

Yes...

YAY!
with eyes looking up chapter 9 . 11/18/2008
oh, i like intense. and iatkaka. it sounds amazing.

right, well. loved the chapter, as always.

the pein/madara scene was delicious, btw. :D looved it.

can't wait for the last chapter!
Dominican Kitsune chapter 9 . 11/16/2008
Another hot chapter! I think that the ItaKaka fict. is a good idea! So get it started so I can read it! XD!
with eyes looking up chapter 8 . 10/19/2008
wow, that was totally, totally hot. i'm not even ashamed that i'm reading this in the living room with my grandparents, aunt, and great grandma. that's kind of sad, but oh well.

great, great scene. i loved it.

and the whole itachi-pein conversation had me cracking up.

i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
with eyes looking up chapter 7 . 10/9/2008
hahaha. this whole thing had me cracking up. message me, dearest, so we can chit-chat. :)
ANDEHPoos chapter 7 . 10/8/2008
D: MadaIta?
Dominican Kitsune chapter 5 . 10/7/2008
Itachi kissing Orochimaru like that was interesting...not in a bad way. Keep up with this fanfiction! I like it alot!
asdf chapter 6 . 10/6/2008
MadaIta FTW!

If you don't mind; I'd like to see some of that ;p

(M Please :D)
My-Sanity-Went-B00m chapter 6 . 9/27/2008
Madara-Itachi. I love manipulative bastards with younger vulnerable teenagers. Wow, that sounded wrong. But whatever. Is Daidara even in this? Because Saso-Dei is hot too. XD

Also, may I say...tentacle rape?
with eyes looking up chapter 6 . 9/26/2008
Hehe, I want to see some heavy-duty yaooi, forizzle. D

I like the MadaPein, ItaPein, ya know. Anything sexy.

Loved the chapter. The beginning made me laugh for like, five minutes. :)
with eyes looking up chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
Oh. Wow.

That kiss was like, way random, but whatever! I love the complicated love-square-triangle-net-web-thing you got going on here. (Let's see...Oro, Ita, Pein, Dara...am I missing anyone...? Oh, Sasori. So, it's like a... pentagon thing. Eh, my brain hurts now...*cries*)

Ahaha, the "Amatarasu!" part cracked me up. I could just see Kisame screaming like a girl. :p It was hilariouss.

Argh, I g2g to school, so I have to cut this short.

Loved the entire thing, as usual, dear. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. :)

xoBreathe
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