Reviews for Victim
Kasper Lawliet chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Wow. I... Words can't describe how happy I am that you wrote this.
americanAccents chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Yay! Misora died! I mean... uh... how dare you kill Ms. Misora!... Anyway, good story. :3
Kunai-sama chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I LOVED the story... But I do not like the ending. O_o Simply because I couldn't picture B doing that to Naomi as well the fact I strongly dislike sad endings... D:

But great story you have here! _ I only found like, one error, but it's not worth mentioning.

Do you have any more B/Naomi fics? Or plan to write any? I would love to read them...

Thanks for sharing!

Totally Lost It chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Excuse me...*slaps BB silly*
BeyondBirthday2 chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
That was pretty cool! Loved it actually! Go Beyond Birthday, I feel bad for Misora though. Lucky he numbed her. Great story, absolutely loved it!
Rem chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I love it. Twisted and good.
MindlessJester chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Now That...Thats Twisted...But Cool! XD
xxlostdreamerxz chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
LOLL an interesting twist. i wonder how L would react to B AND what Misora will do once she comes to her senses.
Wolf Jinchuuriki12 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Wow, this certainly took me by surprise.

Haha, it's really good~

The ending is very suspensful, too! Tell me if you decide to continue it, 'kay?
Ezabelle Cervantes chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
This was gorgeous! Just the amount of sexual brutality i needed!
Greendayluvr93 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Hey! This is pretty good! Please tell me this is going to continue?
The Crone's Daughter chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
It was great
Green Sprout chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
dunno what to say

read some of your stuff for a long time but...this is borderline snuff! Oi! I thought it would had ended differently...*not a snuff fan after looking through greyarchive stuff...*

bad...memories from that site.

it's still a new twist on the whole thing...and I actually want to see what would happen next but it's a one parter.

Silver.Rose.77 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
Well that's an...interesting way to kill someone.
Rinhail chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I do congratulate you for pulling me in and BAM killing my favorite gal.

No hate from this corner, though. But I don't think Naomi would let B do that to her, and B never intended to kill Naomi in the novel. But as you said, it was an experiment.
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