|Reviews for His first|
| yugioh-01 chapter 6 . 10/13/2009
I love this story. If you plan to contuien pleasse do.
| Mantinas chapter 6 . 7/24/2009
Very sad. Good chapter, in paradoxical form, this cheered me up.
I can't wait to read more.
| Mikinori chapter 6 . 4/7/2009
Nice chapter . but Rolo can't die no .
| Mantinas chapter 5 . 4/3/2009
Good story; I cannot wait to read more.
| Elly3981 chapter 4 . 3/24/2009
A couple of typos but other then that, an interesting read. Good job.
| miharu1212 chapter 3 . 9/26/2008
hahaha..i'm growing to like this pairing more n more by the day
tht game is so much fungreat idea..i shud try to make it into a similar game suitable for my usage..muahaha..thnx for providing the ideahahaha..
ya..lulu is such a sore loser..too bad..though he has a "mastermind",he cannot freeze time as rolo can..so..i guess he'll happily lose..anyway..they'll still both end up havin their desires satisfied,right? hsk hsk hsk.. where was i thinking? :p
thnx for writing then all the best for ur next fic _
| Plexi-Lexi chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
this is cute. but i agree, i definitely like rolo as uke. he's just so innocent (other than the killing).
| Emi-chan chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
keep going... I'm tuned in okay? Tee-hee... A little more work on structure and gramar, but the story is progressing...
| dotdotd chapter 3 . 8/29/2008
.;; I didn't need it. Though it is nice.
And I'm sorry if I missed any references. I was paying too much attention to the awesome yaoi-ness going on. So. Write more. Please.
Brotherly love my ass. I like Lelouch on top. D:
Rolouke. all the way.
| dotdotd chapter 2 . 8/29/2008
May I ask, how is this mature material?
...No fluff, no nothing! .