i hope that the reason the story is abandoned is because you're dead.

please don't put your personal feelings into the story. it's clear you greatly dislike neji, so you write naruto giving this long speech about how neji is disgusting. as this is totally out of character for the naturo you have written, this is clearly a mouthpiece for your own fustrations. don't do that. it breaks the immersion of the story.
disappointing.

Probably the best akatsuki naruto fic out there, shame it's unfinished. nice job

Freaking love this story

For once Danzo is right to be pissed off. I don't know if anyone realizes, but Naruto is the ONLY Jinchuriki who wasn't told of his status. Hell, he didn't start training with Kurama's chakra until he was thirteen.

Why aren't you updating?

The last chapter was a little much with the Neji fight, but this was really well done. This is far and away the best Akatsuki story on this site. It's a shame that you stopped writing but I do hope the bug bites you again and you return. Thanks for the story.

What the hell

I like the Temari thing. She and Naruto go well together even temporarily.

Yoshino is Shikamaru's mother, forgot to say it last chapter oops. My bad! Good fanfic!

good story, some cliches but over all very good, hope you update soon.

Excellent story so far. I'm very excited for the next update. Keep up the good work!
Leroy

The relationship between pain and naruto is absolutely adorable!

It seems rather obvious that the 'mysterious ninja' is Konan, and I haven't read any farther than the beginning of your AN for chapter 2 yet. Anyways, I enjoyed this first chapter a lot, because I always enjoy it when a story highlights how stupid Sarotubi's attempt to give him a childhood was, when everyone already hated him and he was all alone.

please do the next chapter soon