Reviews for Houses of the Holy
trash chapter 12 . 10/2/2020
i hope that the reason the story is abandoned is because you're dead.
amateur chapter 10 . 10/2/2020
please don't put your personal feelings into the story. it's clear you greatly dislike neji, so you write naruto giving this long speech about how neji is disgusting. as this is totally out of character for the naturo you have written, this is clearly a mouthpiece for your own fustrations. don't do that. it breaks the immersion of the story.
disappointing.
kannakamui35 chapter 12 . 4/1/2020
Probably the best akatsuki naruto fic out there, shame it's unfinished. nice job
yindragonkiba chapter 12 . 1/25/2019
Freaking love this story
thebestofall chapter 1 . 11/10/2018
For once Danzo is right to be pissed off. I don't know if anyone realizes, but Naruto is the ONLY Jinchuriki who wasn't told of his status. Hell, he didn't start training with Kurama's chakra until he was thirteen.
Man285 chapter 12 . 9/17/2018
Why aren't you updating?
CapriSunnyD chapter 12 . 5/21/2018
The last chapter was a little much with the Neji fight, but this was really well done. This is far and away the best Akatsuki story on this site. It's a shame that you stopped writing but I do hope the bug bites you again and you return. Thanks for the story.
Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 4/15/2018
What the hell
Akashic Vinyl chapter 12 . 9/17/2017
I like the Temari thing. She and Naruto go well together even temporarily.
LyKatherine Adhara chapter 6 . 12/10/2016
Yoshino is Shikamaru's mother, forgot to say it last chapter oops. My bad! Good fanfic!
Gtopia chapter 12 . 9/19/2016
good story, some cliches but over all very good, hope you update soon.
Leroy-San chapter 12 . 7/6/2016
Excellent story so far. I'm very excited for the next update. Keep up the good work!
Leroy
ThePlotBunnies chapter 3 . 2/12/2016
The relationship between pain and naruto is absolutely adorable!
OriksGaming chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
It seems rather obvious that the 'mysterious ninja' is Konan, and I haven't read any farther than the beginning of your AN for chapter 2 yet. Anyways, I enjoyed this first chapter a lot, because I always enjoy it when a story highlights how stupid Sarotubi's attempt to give him a childhood was, when everyone already hated him and he was all alone.
dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 12 . 12/22/2015
please do the next chapter soon
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