Reviews for While We're Together
ShnickerDoodlez chapter 1 . 6/20
I've read a story similar to this, it involved Danny dying, instead of breaking up with Sam. I cried SO hard, but, this, right here... is ten times sadder.

Me during story: *holding back tears*

Me after story: *crying my eyes out*

Great job...
diseptiv chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Sorry but I hated it not a bad story though I'm just a dos fan don't want them to split
TheLonerWriter chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
oh. oh. oh. NOOOO! bad danny he shouldnt of done that omgg sooo saddd and i cried when she said that last part.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Really nice story here. Quite sad and sweet at the same time. Personally, I think that Sam would put up more of a fight and might even talk Danny out of it, but its definitely realistic for Danny to try something like this. :(

You had a couple oddly phrased things like Valerie being expectant instead of expecting or Danny smiling goofy instead of goofily. But nothing big. This was well written and the description fit perfectly and drew me in.

Bravo,

Sapphireswimming
Mz. Jinky chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
aww... that's sad.

-but sweet.
Chrysa Lite chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
I found this in a community, When You Just Wanna Go Aw, and after reading this, I said-yes, you guessed it-Aw. I just wanna cry, so sad and painful...oh Danny how could you!
EmoGurl 301 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I loved the story but it was so sad:( I wanna cry...it was good thought dont worry .
TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
no! bad danny! don't do that to Sam! awesome story though...
christmaswolf chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
*Cries*
Thouqhts-of-Nothinqness chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Very good!

:)

Heh.

Favs.
kawaiiitahina123 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
sad, but really good.
GabbieRox chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Aw!

so sad,

Kinda reminds me of New Moon...

only i sorta DESPISE sad endings. One of these days when i've got the time im gonna go back ancd write extra chapters for a few of ur stories just 4 myself...
KatieB19 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
aw thats so sad! ) sniff D.:
The Motherfickle chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
That was so sad, yet so good. I'm pissed at Danny now. He's losing the love of his life! I noticed that you quoted a Jordin Sparks song at the end. That was a nice touch.
Princess of Rose chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
No! I thought he would propose! Please update!
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