Reviews for The Point of Divergence
Calypto chapter 2 . 3/12
yeah sakura in root it seems. yeah I'm gona jus nope my self out of this fic before i read another sentence. thanks for the effort and all the best with this fic
LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 8 . 12/25/2016
I like the story, but the pace is a bit too slow at the moment, mostly due to the large amounts of explanitory text.

Another thing i think you should consider is that the avarage person does not lnow what a hakama is. The vast remainder does not imagine the ninja style pans when you say that, but instead the pants one sees kendoka use, which are very wide and not ninjs like at all.
Guest chapter 22 . 6/6/2016
Why did Itachi didn't get a normal eye transplanted? That's better than nothing.
BluJay30 chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
good opener
Rogue Survivor chapter 8 . 4/14/2016
If the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu doesn't relay muscle memory, there's no point in putting them through katas. Katas are you used to put the moves into muscle memory so that you react more quickly. Also, dialogue requires a comma at the end of every sentence without punctuation, which appears to have been forgotten in many places throughout this piece.
Meh chapter 3 . 2/17/2016
I already see where this is going and it is stupid. What chapter will you have the "I'm actually working for Danzo!" and have Sakura become some super ninja. Bwhahaha. I wouldn't be surprised if you actually gave her the sharingan or something.
seagate chapter 2 . 1/18/2016
It was good but I really hope you don't give Sakura the Sharingan and make her some super ninja, she only had potential in being a medic and genjutsu, and only Tsunade or Orochimaru could make anything above chunin level,
Kuru0 chapter 32 . 12/22/2015
Great story, few bits and pieces were a bit odd but it wrapped together nicely, looking forward to getting into the sequel
kaifas chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
eok
kaifas chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
eok
kaifas chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
eok
Swifty chapter 32 . 6/17/2015
This story was awesome and well fucking written.
a random dude chapter 18 . 5/26/2015
" He lit the Fag" lol
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 5 . 4/27/2015
The Kage Bunshin limits don't actually apply to him. Having the nine tails allows him to not be effected by the negative consequences. This is shown but the fact that he can train with thousands of clones to make his wind rasengan. He was using them to learn how to do the technique properly. So it is incorrect that Naruto wood bleed from having more then 5 clones.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/7/2014
The whole "Hinata can't be with Naruto because of the clan" thing is kind of forced to me. You could have just left it at Naruto and Hinata being too different to make a good couple. Or you could have simply had Naruto turn Hinata down.
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