Well, you gave Sakura dementia and turned her against Naruto. Let's see where this goes.

I love how the story is unlike any naruto story I've ever read. Just how real reactions. How that consequences do happen. I love how you've changed your relationship with characters. Man if I ever start writing fanfiction. It'll be because of this story. A long read indeed, but man what a story

Ricky

First off, if you actually seen when this story was published, you would realize that the information and story lines presented here is either outdated or retconned. Also, the author clearly hasn't updated since of 2011, both this and the sequel. It also shows when a commentor has a lack of ignorance when they don't clearly read the update date before typing a comment.

So, I think the story of Rin and not Obito would've been a better comparison here as Kakashi actually killed her by his hand and like Naruto it wasn't intentional she threw herself into the attack to prevent herself from releasing the 3 tailed bijuu in Konoha while Sasuke died from prolonged exposure in a weakened state to the Kyuubi chakra.

a lil bit cringe at the last part but overall great story!

Ur story is great btw but I just feel like u focus too much on what's going on with the villains and stuff
Like maybe ficus a bit more on Konoha?

No nuke nin are most of the times betrayed by there village

To soppy

Why mot have Naruto and neji team up with a 3rd member lik yakumo and sai?

This story is old and suffers from grammar mistakes and the plot being everywhere and not having a good flow of direction. Writing this before having full knowledge of the story makes it suffer. Tobirama invented the shadow clone Jutsu not the Uzumaki clan, you made up a kage for the stone when in cannon his name is Onoki who uses particle style. Kakashi knew naruto was minatos son I don’t why you made it to where he was oblivious to that fact. But to sum it all up you dragging the story out making Sakura a poor villain and lacking knowledge about the naruto universe makes this story below average. It shows when it has over 300k plus words with little positive feedback and lack of favorites and follows.

Absolutely fucking retarded

D ranked mission turned fatal. Wow bitch, you are a genius arent you, save the girl(kunoichi) from falling logs when they are trained to dodge high speed kunai and shuriken, and then win her heart. Couples paired, story complete.

Maybe sakura has become quite sociopath but she has her reasons, her life just became the worst nightmare ever, and she did face naruto with his kyubi chakra which can scare people shitless and cloud their judgement while turning on survival instincts.
On the other hand naruto is acting like a complete dick, he too has his reasons but the way he is torn between over enthusiastic all loving, and rude self loathing hate filled kid is sign of his not so good mental condition.
Yeah its sakura who got the shorter end of the stick, but lets see how naruto matures and sakura avenges.

Heyyyy this was not fair! But I guess I understand...somewhat. Hinata and Naruto were always the opposite ends, well, Kishimoto chose "opposites attract" but it can go the other way too, I guess.

Wonderful chapter! At one point I was acutally cheering and whooping for Hinata! That "Stay away from Naruto kun. You attack him, you attack the Hyuga" OOOOOH MYYY HEARTTT! Aww geez, though I know this is a NarutoIno fic, I really would have loved to see him end up with this Hinata! Honestly she is so freaking cool!