If the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu doesn't relay muscle memory, there's no point in putting them through katas. Katas are you used to put the moves into muscle memory so that you react more quickly. Also, dialogue requires a comma at the end of every sentence without punctuation, which appears to have been forgotten in many places throughout this piece.

I already see where this is going and it is stupid. What chapter will you have the "I'm actually working for Danzo!" and have Sakura become some super ninja. Bwhahaha. I wouldn't be surprised if you actually gave her the sharingan or something.

It was good but I really hope you don't give Sakura the Sharingan and make her some super ninja, she only had potential in being a medic and genjutsu, and only Tsunade or Orochimaru could make anything above chunin level,

Great story, few bits and pieces were a bit odd but it wrapped together nicely, looking forward to getting into the sequel

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This story was awesome and well fucking written.

" He lit the Fag" lol

The Kage Bunshin limits don't actually apply to him. Having the nine tails allows him to not be effected by the negative consequences. This is shown but the fact that he can train with thousands of clones to make his wind rasengan. He was using them to learn how to do the technique properly. So it is incorrect that Naruto wood bleed from having more then 5 clones.

The whole "Hinata can't be with Naruto because of the clan" thing is kind of forced to me. You could have just left it at Naruto and Hinata being too different to make a good couple. Or you could have simply had Naruto turn Hinata down.

please let naruto butcher sakura in the worst way possible.

Good story. Enjoyed every bit of it.

So boring, m not reading anymore

God damned, the kami of shinobi killed very anticlimactic way, not what I suspected would happen.