Reviews for The Point of Divergence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() man i hate sasuke, (who doesn't!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this fic and I hope that you continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey if you decided to do a pairing can you pai Naruto up with Yugito please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is strange. This is one of the few fanfics that I can get a clear idea on how it will play out. It a nice change of pace. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pfft, Ninja's and there titles. They think they're so special. Great story by the way. Hope Sakura fails and dies. She should never amount to anything since she never put any effort into anything in season 1. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is very interesting! I love it. Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is shaping up to be something really special among all of the (excuse me) pieces of literary crap spawned by the Naruto-fandom every single day of the week. Not only do you seem to have a genuinely interesting and original plot to drive your story to greatness, but you also write very VERY well. Your grammar and vocabulary alone is far superior to my own, yet I consider myself to be lightyears ahead of some "authors" on this site... so where does that put you? Somewhere good, of that much I'm certain. Your characters are made original in a way that doesn't differ too much from the canon versions, with the natural exception of Sakura of course. It's always interesting to see different people's theories on how the story would have progressed if some "minor" changes were made early on, and you seem to have an idea that will work really well. For the first time in quite some time, I feel like I'm reading fanfiction instead of mockery, so take your time and write at the speed you feel most comfortable with, and I'm sure you'll do very well with this fic as well as any you might start in the future. I, for one, have fate in your work and will keep on reading (-for now). Good luck! -VyseN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Making it that Kyuubi's charkra killed Sasuke and having Sakura joining Danzo in order to get revenge makes this the darkest fan fic I have ever read that still has Naruto as a good person. It looking quite good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() Though I hate to see Naruto in emotional pain, I have to see what will happen to him once the village find out that he survived, but Sasuke didn't. Grainted the physical pain that the villagers might inflict might hurt too. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this update please! |