Smart. Very detailed description. Still hope that Naruto's personality will change.
All in all - well done.

Whyyy. Why play the Sakura hates him card and to justify it a stupid ass misunderstanding. I don't see the point but I suppose it's a plot point of some sort. D: I'll just keep reading.

Great fic, got its own unusual storyline with twists and turns than keep it interesting, will go on to read the next installment now,
Peace Out
Sandaime Hokage

a mad eye moody quote and a person dying of arthritis...priceless.

good chapter

woe some people truly are demons from hell set out to hurt or kill naruto

sakura really has lost her mind i dont like her anymore even if she is mentally unstable

ku ku ku nice job ku ku ku

oh that was sad nice work though

Just a warning you should remove the authors note at the end. There is a big purge going on right now. Otherwise really liked the story.

i really like your story. All the twists and turns. Im not a huge Orochimaru fan but when The Three agreed to work together against a common foe...I got CHILLS!

Very interesting so far, very well written.

At this point though, the Sakura bashing seems to be rather overdone, but I suppose I can ignore it for the time being and assume there's not much of an attempt to stay in character here and it's a very AU thing.

The praise of Naruto gets a bit overkill here, too. His saving of Ino, the people praising him, etc, seems all too compacted and feels forced. Should probably be spread among several chapters instead.

u kno ive read stories but urs is basicaly bashing naruto u got a negitive -1000 from me

The biggest piece of shit I've ever read.

This is one dark and pessimistic fanfic.

I just read till now hoping something good will happen, but apparently Naruto is destined to suffer and suffer and suffer, according to you.

Man, what a waste of time.