|Reviews for Sexual Tension|
| reppad98 chapter 1 . 7/20
Okay, I admit, I read this story several times over the course of quite some time but never actually left a proper review for it. Since PokeshipperByHeart reminded me of the awesomeness of your stories, I decided that now was just as good a time as any to properly read and review. The plot is great, otherwise I wouldn't have come back so many times to read it haha, and I like how you tried to make it more anime like by May being silly and stuff like that. Poor Max haha. You do however have small spelling mistakes like 'off course' instead of 'of course' and you sometimes miss punctuation in your dialogue, but simply reading over it again and correcting those small mistakes is easily done. Anyway, this was a very fun story, the ending was cute, and Max and his know-it-all nature were portrayed well, I think.
Thank you for writing this, I love it and I'll go read the sequel now, and keep writing! ! !
| SugarrCrystal chapter 1 . 7/10
I loved this so much omgggggg
| Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 5/14
Oh my god that was amazing! XDDDDD
| NeoRWBY chapter 1 . 3/13
poor Max XD TEEHEHEEE
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
omg what have you poor max i feel bad for him
| makarina chapter 1 . 1/15
awwwww so sweet.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
HA HA HA HA ! Poor Max!
| AllSeeingComment chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
| Uma qualquer chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
Ai meu Deussssssssss, que que acabou de acontecer aqui? Melhor fic da história, muito engraçado, HaHaHaHa. Estou rindo até agora. Genial, tensão sexual!
| Anonymous1O1 chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
This was hilarious! I'll definitely be back to read this one over again!
| Revenial chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
nice quick, clean as it could be and honest. Great little one shot!
| Mrs. Nose chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
At this rate I'll end up favoriting all of your stories!
This was hilarious. Poor Max, but at least he got them together!
| Me chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
Me when I finished the fic: Hmm, I wonder what sexual tension is... (I was ten)
Searching it up: ...
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
I wish it showed sex with misty and ash and max having sex too
| Lovely Astronauts chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
This is so perfect!