Brilliant! Can't wait to read more :)

-A.

omg! stop leaving me with cliff hangars! i'm gonna die of anicipation! love it! continue! and update soon! i'll be waiting!

Great chapter, as always. I like seeing a bit of action with the Book... I'm beginning to think Mr. Colfer forgot about it entirely!

Favorite lines:

Yes, ordinary would be nice too.

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“I feel like… I’ve seen this shape before…” he murmured.

“Biology textbook?” asked Foaly, raising an eyebrow.

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I can't wait for the next update! This story is really exciting, and has such a good flow. It's almost like reading one of the books (but I'll try not to count my chickens before they hatch)!

~Verity

What a relief, after the drivel that's infecting this fandom, to see another well-written and engrossing chapter. I could almost wish Colfer hadn't written TTP since it's spawned so much nonsense. I afmire your characterisation of Angeline; you've given her a much more credible persona than she has in the books and I love your treatment of No 1, I fell in love with him in TLC but was disappointed by TTP where he'd become very one-dimensional, thank you for restoring his character. Just one point: do you mean Haven was going into lockdown rather than shielding?

OK this is officially my favorite AF story right now! Your writing is so detailed and almost exactly like Colfers! You have to update soon (please)!

ps Ok this is a random thing but what does ur penname mean?

This is really good so far, it looks very promising! Please update soon, I'm enjoying it a lot :D

Hey. I was wondering how you knew so much about the time paradox and stuff. Awesome chapters (I read the others before thismone, but was too lazy to review all of them. Angeline entering the story is a bit of a twist. What are you going to do with her?

HazelFaeri

I like it, please continue, I don't mind even if it takes a million chapters. Its very good. And of course in my opinion, Artemis and Holly belong together. I can't wait for the next update and I think that if you write during the day you could have finished about twenty chapters within a week.

Yay, Angeline! (I think.) I like how you incorporated The Book into the plot.

I have to say, this is the best beginning of an AF fanfic that I've read in awhile. Please update soon!

This is very confusing to me, but that's nothing you should worry about. Thinking about time has always left me reaching for Advil, God knows I got a monster of a headache from reading The Time Paradox. This is a very good idea and I really really really want you to continue.

oh its so good right now u have to update as soon as possible

-thrilled reader

AH4EVER

I notice a bit of a canon problem here. In Time Paradox it's explicitly stated that magic comes from the Earth (I don't remember which page, but it's during the discussion of Spelltropy), and it's also hinted in the other books. Thus, magic-oriented creatures like sprites and elves disappearing last because they're least connected with the Earth doesn't make sense. And even if you ignore that, centaurs should vanish right after gnomes, if not sooner, because they have absolutely no magic (Arctic Incident).

Well, I've just started reading from this chapter, so I'll review from this point onwards. Brilliant work! I like the way you've thought this out. You've got Colfer's style down to a "T", in my opinion, and your characterisation is excellent- if a little bit out, in my opinion. Arty's had six books to mellow out, you'd think he would've accomplished it by now! And Holly's a bit fonder of Arty than she used to be... Still, it's excellently done nevertheless, and you've done characters like No1 and Foaly perfectly.

Otherwise, it's quite immaculate. You may want to watch where you put (or don't put) your commas, though. Just something that a Grammar Nazi such as myself wanted to point out. Oh, and, as far as I'm aware, quantum mechanics can't explain what time is in the first place... so theorize away. ;) (I'm not a scientist YET, I just like to read the Wikipedia pages on it.) I'm awaiting your next chapter eagerly!

Wow...i am extremely impressed, Brillinat writing, use of language. I always wondered how the international community would handle contact between faries and humans. People always seem to be skirting round that issue though. Keep up the good work and you'll be sure to get more reviews from me. I will also offer myself up as a designated beta reader and editor for you to use.

Toodles-Alex