Nice job creating a passage from the Book. You've got a good sense of the language. Also, the science behind fairies disappearing seems good (even if the theory is completely made up!)

Ooh, Angeline and Holly meeting face-to-...er, abdomen. Should be interesting!

Just a couple of mistakes I noticed, too. Not to be nitpicky or anything, but you said a couple of times that six years had passed, when it had really been more like nine (assuming that this takes place a year after The Time Paradox), unless you were referring to six years after Holly's kidnapping. Also, I think you said once they had disappeared for two years, instead of three. Sorry, but I do get awfully OCD about time schematics. :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Verity

I can't resist a good hammering... but to be honest, your Chaos Theory - Rasin Bread analogy was surprisingly accurate... I quite like fics with technical details. The fictional Webber's theory sounds resonable... (but ultimately unprovable in real-world physics... shame.)

I'll be back for chap 4,

Academician

Gr. Cliffhanger. PLEASE continue! I'm going to guess that the woman is Angeline.

Nice...is the woman Angeline? You have Artemis perfectly in character, btw, and dont worry; I shan't dissect Webber's theory as quantum physics is frankly frightening to me ;)

This is incredibly impressive; the technical detail on the time paradox effects puts Mr. Colfer's last book to shame it's so well thought out. You tie together canon elements with your own take on characters so well, especially Angeline. (Is she about to be a dea ex machina?) Wonderful. Thank you. Gnommish has a double m.

Wow this fic is so good! I almost feel like I'm reading an actual book written by Colfer! Update soon!

i always thought the Holly/Arty pair to be a bit out there, but apparently Eoin colfer does not think so. though, i do hope you give them a hard time... just for the heck of it.

I really like this story so far. You have a good grasp of the books and an excellent understanding of the characters. I look forward to reading more.

Again, another amazing chapter! Your attention to detail is simply marvolous and the length is perfect! I am so glad that it is going to be A/H! But now I'm hungry for rasin bread D

Wow! You've obviously put a lot of well-placed thought into this. I especially liked the raisin analogy-excellent example of a butterfly effect.

This is really exciting! I can't wait to read more!

~Verity

nice, long chapter here, not enough of those to go around anymore. i didn't notice any major spelling or grammar errors. update soon!

love it so far update soon

this is a story that i will definatley be following...keep up the good work

love it! exactly like eoin colfer! keep on writing! love it! love it! love it!

Alrighty then... God, I can't think of any constructive criticism! But anyways, this is awesome and I am anxiously awaiting an update)

Rawk on

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