Reviews for Rain
nequam-tenshi chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
so this was the one that went another with "Pain".

nice story
kawaiichiisaikitsune chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
I'm laying on one side with an

arm that isn't very coordinated.

But I'm still replying, so bam!

That was rather cute. I think Atobe

was a bit...OOC? And I wish you had

elaborated more on Atobe's problem,

but I understand it was more Jiroh-

oriented. Either way, I enjoyed it.

Great job!

-Dana.
rapturousdreams chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
aaw...Jirou... *cries* so...wonderful...

i love this... *sniffs*

Atobe didn't say "Ore-sama" how sweet~

great job! you knwo, my first story was an AtoJi too~ ok. the Naruto fanfic does not count since it's on permanent hiatus. :P

thank you for sharing this~
verbal acuity chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Aww, poor Jirou. ): He's so cute, how could Atobe yell at him? -snugglesjirou- I liked this. Especially where Jirou took out the 'Ore-sama' for Jirou. Cute story!