|Reviews for Why?|
| NatWolfgang483 chapter 2 . 1/7/2011
this was great i loved it. aldo im not a fan of Pedmund this was a good fic oh and dont listen to those flamers (sons of a ###). you are great. i ot flamed too on my story but that did not stop me from doing something i love.
i ord to all flamers!
DONT LIKE IT, DONT READ IT
you just wasted her time on sending her the flames!
keep moving forward !
| Arthur PennyDragon chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
great story again?
will we find out who she is?
don't read it if u just goin to dis it, make it creative, not just because it ''wrong''
just need to finish the last battle, i love Narnia
| just.young.and.reckless chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
I thought this was very gd! Its nice to read something very different then wot is normally done and i enjoyed readin it!
So dont listen to people who flame, they just dont ave anything better to do with there sad lifes!
| XxxHandsOnMexxX chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Flamers, don't you have anything else to do?
If this isn't your cup of tea, why the hell do you read it?
I thought this story was absolutely AMAZING.
| GoGothGirl chapter 2 . 8/8/2008
you know, reading this for the second time didnt change my view of your awesomeness at all! LOL
glad you posted this here.
oh, and ignore the bloody flamers. if they had guts, they would have signed in before they thrashed this brilliant fic.
| The Madman From Hollywood chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
Nice two-shot. The tone Edmund's 'confession' got across to me was that he felt pretty sorry for himself, but it WOULD be kind of impossible to write it as his thoughts, since this is in the point of view of the girl.
And ignore the flames. If people don't like this sort of thing, why do they always take the time to read it? Ugh...
| peace.love.write chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
This is dark. Very dark. I guess that's your intent so if it is you got it across. I don't like the Peter/Edmund thing though.
| OMFg chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
that was, good in a way. but you totally killed edmund pevensie. yh, he felt guilty and was mean and all, but he changed in the end for the better, didn't he?
This is sick. chilling, but sick.
| How could you chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
Your conscience must be totally dead. If you had ANY sense of right and wrong, you wouldn't be posting this perverted crap.
Thanks for totally decimating the books of my childhood. For Aslan's sake, keep your smutty trash out of Narnia and go invade someone else's fandom.
| millet crunch jr chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
Well, that was just plain sick. Why on earth would you want to post something that's so offensive on so many levels?
| You dont need to know chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
I. hate. your. guts.
You sick, perversed, evil, unholy son of a *.
How DARE you bring this * into the Edmund archive? The Peter, Susan and Caspian archives are completely trashed, must you take down Edmund with them!
No writing talant, complete and absolute wreckage to such a beloved masterpiece created by Jack, and you bring a popular American ritual into it all.