|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Determinations of Fate|
| Jestrbob chapter 11 . 4/13
One year sooner than canon.
Call this part one and finished
Part two Harry and the world fights back
| Ranmaleopard chapter 11 . 4/1
This is just awesome keep it up
| MSgt SilverDollar chapter 11 . 8/24/2014
Great story too bad it seems to be abandoned. WittyRavenclaw needs to learn what A/U means, and that if you want canon to read what JKR wrote since this is fan fiction for a reason.
| WittyRavenclaw chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
I hate what the author has done to the characters, most of all Harry! Harry would never have done...well, all of those things! I have to give it some points, though, because even though I was irritated at how un-in-character all the people in this were, I couldn't stop reading, so that does say something about the style. I suppose it's just a little too angsty for my taste.
| Avior Schedar chapter 11 . 2/20/2014
| Philosophize chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
You did we'll with this. It's a shame you didn't continue, but this is a better stopping point than usually seen with abandoned stories.
| pinky9292 chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
this is brilliant, ha the irony of voldy being injured by a snakes venom.
| misty103 chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
I can accept Ron bashing, as frankly he deserves it. Hermione is just a touch cruel.
| Poe-Boy911 chapter 11 . 2/23/2013
you should continue this story until after the war
| Endgames chapter 11 . 2/15/2013
This is certainly an interesting story. I like the small amounts of realism that you add in the interpersonal relationships. The writing itself seems to be a little choppy, but I assume that is because you don't want to dwell too long on essentially canon dialog or events. I hope you decide to come back and update a little more. I'll keep an eye on it.
| DracoDreams-2 chapter 11 . 1/17/2013
Good story I can't wait for an update
| Scabbers1957 chapter 3 . 12/21/2012
Yes he does understand...
I'm a very big Harry/Luna fan...
Well on with the story...
| jh831 chapter 11 . 11/17/2012
very good story
great chapter lenths
hope to see more
| Bing Bing 9312 chapter 11 . 11/12/2012
You can't stop there! That has got to be the worst freaking cliff-hanger I've ever had the misfortune to be stuck with! Nooooooo! Please please please don't stop there. This story is so good. Please continue. Please give us another chapter. I'm begging. Down on my knees, begging. PLEASE!
Okay, now that being said, I absolutely love this story. The plot is similar to ones I've read before but you've given it an original twist. I love it. Also, your Luna is perfect. You used just enough dreaminess to make her character believable. I think Hermione's character was a little off in the beginning but you convinced me that you can write her later on in the story. And Harry is wow. Good job. I think for the most part, you've got a great story here. (Which is why you shouldn't abandon it! Please update.)