|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Determinations of Fate|
| Estavius chapter 2 . 8/17
Swords aren't really something you can effectively learn in a few weeks, but eh, fantasy has engrained it within many that it's something 'that' simple. Honestly, he could probably do better than a sword (barring a magical one like like Gryffindor one) with curses, whilst staying much safer and not having to go within striking range of any magical creatures, almost all of which being much faster than a human. Moreover, depending on how the blade is swung, it might easily glance off if the angle is wrong, making the cutting power worthless.
Ah well. There is something 'romantic' about swords, after all.
| Chise Sakamoto chapter 11 . 6/5
| blinddivinity chapter 11 . 5/25
Great fic! Can't wait to read more. :)
| Gunny Highway chapter 11 . 12/27/2015
Dammmmnnnnn it's too bad this has been abandoned!
| Jestrbob chapter 11 . 4/13/2015
One year sooner than canon.
Call this part one and finished
Part two Harry and the world fights back
| Ranmaleopard chapter 11 . 4/1/2015
This is just awesome keep it up
| MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 11 . 8/24/2014
Great story too bad it seems to be abandoned. WittyRavenclaw needs to learn what A/U means, and that if you want canon to read what JKR wrote since this is fan fiction for a reason.
| WittyRavenclaw chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
I hate what the author has done to the characters, most of all Harry! Harry would never have done...well, all of those things! I have to give it some points, though, because even though I was irritated at how un-in-character all the people in this were, I couldn't stop reading, so that does say something about the style. I suppose it's just a little too angsty for my taste.
| Avior Schedar chapter 11 . 2/20/2014
| Philosophize chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
You did we'll with this. It's a shame you didn't continue, but this is a better stopping point than usually seen with abandoned stories.
| pinky9292 chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
this is brilliant, ha the irony of voldy being injured by a snakes venom.
| misty103 chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
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| FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
I can accept Ron bashing, as frankly he deserves it. Hermione is just a touch cruel.
| Poe-Boy911 chapter 11 . 2/23/2013
you should continue this story until after the war
| Endgames chapter 11 . 2/15/2013
This is certainly an interesting story. I like the small amounts of realism that you add in the interpersonal relationships. The writing itself seems to be a little choppy, but I assume that is because you don't want to dwell too long on essentially canon dialog or events. I hope you decide to come back and update a little more. I'll keep an eye on it.