Reviews for Professional Silence
queer-serenity chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
Oh wow, I just got through this, and I love it, but also sad, aw :'(
Valex Charme chapter 7 . 5/2/2012
Nooo! Kaidan never dies because no one ever saves Ashley! :(
Valex Charme chapter 3 . 5/1/2012
I'm gonna kill Ashley!
Renn chapter 7 . 12/5/2011
No you didn't. You evil, evil person. Why? Whyyyyy?

haha of course it had to end like that...wait a sec...NO IT DIDN'T! aw well, it was still awesome but...still...the other ending would've been nice too...

Anyway. I absolutely loved how you described their relationship. All of it. Thank you SO much for shairing!
Skaiwa chapter 7 . 9/13/2011
An unusual pairing, at least I think so ... but you totally made it work.

Great, emotional story. I wasn't prepared for the ending at all. Too sad. :(
Idessatyrking chapter 7 . 3/21/2011
That was good, nicely done.
obsydiandreams chapter 7 . 2/17/2011
beautiful and bittersweat.

i applaud this...
obsydiandreams chapter 5 . 2/17/2011
i had tears in my eyes reaching the end of this one...
obsydiandreams chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
oh i really actually like how you ended this... subtle, but still fun. :)

nicely done with the descriptions... i like Garrus being a bit shy, its really cute.

i'm really loving this.
obsydiandreams chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
oooh. oh I think I'm going to like this story a lot... the writing is phenomenal, and i'm really getting a feel for garrus/kaidan.

nicely written, very visual.

and it helps that I literally JUST finished this mission, like 20 minutes ago. :D

moving on now, cause this is fantastic.
Rainbow-man chapter 7 . 2/4/2010
I really don't even know what to say. In a good way, but...

Goddamn. I don't really know how to tell you how much I liked this. I feel like saying, "this is good," is too trite, too shallow. I hope you can find that I like this deeper than that. -Shrug- I'm going to draw this. Do you mind?
Jelfia Maleak chapter 7 . 1/10/2010
that was a refreshing take on couples... great story, flowed very well.
Chair in the Stairway chapter 8 . 1/17/2009
The only thing I can see wrong with this story are a few mistakes near the beginning.

That aside, I must say, I'm envious of the fact that you can fit into a few short chapters what would likely take me a novel, or novella, to illustrate. It's commendable, at least, and I felt you should know that; looking at the other comments, though, it seems you likely already do. The thing that really stands out about this story is that I, a person with a generally low knowledge of the characters in Mass Effect thanks to repeated attempts by fate to keep me from playing through the game, can actually stand in the situation, as a silent bystander, and feel what's being felt without stopping to tell myself that it's either not real or entirely silly. Many stories have given me such a feeling; this one was far from delivering it.

Also, I loved the continuous mentioning of time, or lack thereof, early one. A great bit of foreshadowing for the reader that I, afraid to admit it as I am, could not catch for my life, and all the other little literary devices sprinkled here and there made this one of the more interesting reads I've encountered. Plus, you managed to make me question my vocabulary and think, "Hey, I know that word!" simultaneously.

All in all, you've done a good job with this work of fiction as it stands. I wish I had encountered it sooner, as waiting for each and every chapter, like I am awaiting the final one now, would have served as a great push update my own pieces.
Blackrain7557 chapter 8 . 1/9/2009
Poor Garrus is right, an emotional roller coaster for the poor turian.

Overall its an intense and very well written story that gives a lot of emotion and detail in a short time. It was also a well done story for the plot you worked with, the relationship was difficult to imagine, but you managed to write it very well.
AccidentalSuicideBomber chapter 8 . 1/9/2009
Poor Garrus...
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