O/ v /O I love dirty talk XD

U must be very high

O-oh my... 0/0 I've read plenty of smut on this website but this is the first time in awhile I've blushed.

...is hot in here or is that just me..? 0/0

What did I just read.

Cake-porn? Yaoi with a side of frosting?

...

I don't know what to say.

...(Except I'm a huge pervert for liking this)

At first I was horrified... But it was a surprisely hot ff X3 I guessing that everyone of their challenges in the future is gonna end with sex? XD

Damn this story is just so hot! I love dirty talk and food play 3 I will embarrassingly admit that I got turned on at school reading this

Jesus Christ, which butcher shop did he steal that salami from!? love that line!

Sick as it is, it's still one of my favorites! ;3
Does this make me sick and insane as well? :0
Seriously though, this one is awesome! ;D

I loved it xD
I beg you to make a sequel of L 'getting the crumbs out' ;3

Hehe! That was fun.
Thanks for the read

So disturbing it's friggin hot!

You ARE sick, for writing this; and I'm ALSO sick for enjoying this SO GODAMN MUCH. Though hell is this sickness so FUCKING GOOD. GREAT JOB with...*colossal nosebleed* fuck, EVERYTHING.

One of the most interesting, hilarious, sexiest (and major turn on) one-shot I've read.

From one sick pervert to another...: AMAZING STORY! As a prize, here is your strawberry sponge cake...

...You know what to do with it.

Amazingly funny, just what I needed after a day like today. You made me laugh out loud more than twice :) good job on this fic, Kiva XD

HOLY FUCK, THAT WAS AMAZING! Just...wow. L fucked a cake, Raito got horny, and then they did it; how utterly orgasmic. Simply brilliant. X) Anyways, I LOVED the dirty talk; definitely an epic turn on...So from one pervert to another, great job!

You should SO write another chapter with L getting those crumbs out, by the way. ;P

Oh sweet mother of lord! ** That was just so... I'm at a loss for words XD