|Reviews for Revelations|
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/24/2017
i cant see the dresses ive looked it up but i cant see on another note i love the story so much
| Splutterking chapter 12 . 7/6/2016
Don't waste a whole chapter on this shit!
| Ally chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
Good so far.
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
that was so awesome and so edward! jacob wouldnt react like that though. hes not afraid of edward.
| Lermanlover chapter 24 . 2/10/2014
No pressure but your story is great I understand you can't revolve your life around your fanfiction your a great writer and just so you know I'm a reader that cares.
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/1/2013
Omg love this story! After reading other fanfictions about Jacob and Leah, I started hating Renesme but after your amazing writing, I love them as a couple! Can't wait for the next chapter, I really want to see how it turns out! Love your work! xoxo
| xxxroseooo chapter 24 . 7/1/2012
please write morreeee! i love this story
| UKStmbrwlf chapter 14 . 1/27/2011
Hey, I kow that the story is finished and all that, and I am not sure when you will get this review, but in chapter 12 shouldn't the Ferarri ba a 2013 model instead of a 2009, the story is supposed to take place 5 years after Breaking Dawn, just saying, good story! :D
| KBHP Account No Longer Active chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
This is a good start. The writing is really smooth. I'm going to keep reading until the end...
| Shiny Otter chapter 27 . 10/16/2009
aw. i liked it... i'll go read her's i guess, but i think yours was better. _
| Amethystars chapter 27 . 9/25/2009
Too bad you're not finishing it, but thanks for letting someone else do it. I liked this story, it was fun and happy.
| Tinkybell13 chapter 2 . 8/20/2009
Dum dum dum... is the dreaded 'don't fool around with my six year old daughter' talk coming? Great writing so far!
| Tinkybell13 chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
I like the introduction... :) Its always difficult to write a good introduction which keeps us wanting to read.. :)
| mediate89 chapter 25 . 7/22/2009
Why in the world would Emily's pregnancy only be four months long?
| BlackTreaderWolf chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Cool and could you read mine.