Reviews for Ichibichan
Damix96 chapter 3 . 8/12/2011
this seems interesting, i found this story on crazyfoxdemon's profile and it said you were working on it
Axl chapter 3 . 10/20/2008
A good idea, but the spelling doesn't really help. I think you're going a bit fast in the second chapter Naruto barely wakes up and they instantly fall in love, not to be mean but it doesn't really live up to the potential. It's only advice but make the chapters longer, check your spelling, develop the plot and you'll have even more reviews. Well, good luck, and this is not a flame, it is advice.
lex luthore chapter 3 . 10/11/2008
great fic first time ive seen this paring please dont ruine it by throwing hinata into the mix like most stories do keep this one fresh and rare.-
Cooltony101neo chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Well, you misspelled Gaara, and you should put a space in the title between Ichibi and chan, or a dash (-)
Cursed Evil chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
great chapter keep up the good work
alone shadow dream chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
fem gaara is to rare so i cant wait to see how you write it
Challenger chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
i think 's name should be Rose because her hair is red and it would be like she is the rose of the dessert