|Reviews for Can't I just do my Homework?|
| jessica499499 chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
It was okay. It could use more detail.
| egg10rru chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I like! You should continue ;P
| OogieBoogie chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
S. E. X. Y.
| moriah93ohio chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
That was good. I like it.
| TheyCallMeCyclone chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
i think this was an excellent first story. you didn't have any spelling mistakes as far as i can tell and you had a plot. just a little advice though, it was kind of confusing to follow what was happening. try more detailed opening and a distinction between memories and just daydreams. also i think that detailing actions would make this better. i still think it was very good though- even some people here that have like twenty stories misspell easy words, so congratulations on that[:
-kaila aka cyclone
| YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Caught And Let Go?