Ok great story but no closure on the very important info about what Jessica and Laurant’s punishments were. I’ll move on to the next story.

The chapter repeated. We didn’t get the wedding. And there is no sequel 16 years later so I guess there never will be. The last things that were written were in 2013 around 12 years ago so I guess there’s no hope for a sequel after all. Well I’m gonna read Readjusted , I hope there is an actual ending to that one, and then the Serendipity series and then the Camp Wilderness series. I guessI should be thankful that they are actually finished. I hope there are no cliffhangers at the ends of those stories. I love reading your stories, but I have to say I’m really disappointed about not having closure. I get that real life happens, but try not to make promises that you don’t keep. Reading on…

What happened to the wedding? It got skipped over. And What is going on with Jessica’s trial? She should lose all rights to Abby for the stunt she pulled.

When Jessica goes to prison for faking her death she will no longer have any visitation right to Abby. Plus Abby should not be forced to see her if she doesn’t want to.

There is so much information missing. Jessica is flat out lying through her teeth. I really hope they se right through her.

Abby did good. I hope the judge takes her feelings into consideration .

Why didn’t his lawyer say anything about Edward proposing and Jessica saying that she had an abortion? This is despicable.

Jessica should be tarred and feathered, not fighting for custody. I know, fiction. I just want justice for that little girl and her REAL family. One that stepped up, not skipped out. Especially after all the lies Jessica told Abby about Edward. I hope it all comes out in the trial. I want to see Jessica in trouble for this. I’m talking about real prison time.

Ok if she faked her death she is in a lot more trouble than just wanting Abby. It is illegal to fake your own death. She would NOT be getting Abby back, she would be on her way to prison.

I’m sure she’ll say a resounding YES! It’s great that they asked both questions on the same day, so they can officially be a family together on the same day. It is gonna be wonderful!

I think he has to do the proposal with Abby too. They are a package deal after romantic and sweet.

We don’t get Renee’s reaction and interaction with Abby? I was looking forward to that.

Wow, I thought the payback would be for Mike. If Alice takes the job she can fire him for risk of a sexual harassment suit, and disloyal conduct, not to mention the fact that he let the Paps into the hotel and get at Edward and his daughter. he probably did it on purpose too. She can get way better security than him!

It’s ok to have a life beyond fan fiction. If you fall asleep or have something to do, you do not have to explain it to us and apologize. You are only accountable to yourself. You should be having fun writing, not pressuring yourself and stressing about it. Love your work. We are lucky that you are publishing it for us to read.
I think Abby has the right idea. Edward needs to get off his butt! Abby should always be reminded that Bella loves her like a mother and will act as a mother, but she cannot replace her. Only be the best mom the Bella can be. Edward should propose and then give Bella the restaurant as an engagement present.

They do need to sue for slander, defamation of character, libel and loss of wages. The rag mag can finance her new restaurant that way. Two birds, one very large stone!