Reviews for Better With Two
ElizaE354 chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
Suuper good
Diiawb2 chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
I loved this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Really good!
hauntedpumpkin56 chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
aww. loved it
Vicky chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Can you make this longer :)
Shawna chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Great one-shot! I loved this story of Bella and Jasper. Great job!
Shawna chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Great story! Absolutely loved it!
AnnaKathlyn15 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
its cute and sweet. nice composition!
PoppyMay chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
That was cute! Thanks for writing! : )
Irene Moriarty chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Its nice to see them bond! ;)
Taru Galateia chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
1. I looked at him, my eyes clouded by confused.

2. I could feel a hand on my check, a thumb gently brushing my eyelids.

3. Sleep love, we all day tomorrow and I’ll be here with you all night.

1. Confused should be confusion.

2. Check should be cheek.

3. You forgot "have".

I noticed other things that could have been fixed but I'm getting tired of writing huge reviews for now and it's best for authors if they only take a little criticism from me as possible. XD

I love the story, by the way. I almost always end my reviews with a positive unless I'm still reading what all they've wrote so far. XD

Keep up the good work!

FRK921 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
how cute!

xox to Jasper!
SunshineXRainbows chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I really like the story.
Jessie07 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Cute story!
FrozenBloom chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I want to thank you for writing that. It was a real look into the relationship between Bella and Jasper.
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