Reviews for Better With Two
Vicky chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Can you make this longer :)
Shawna chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Great one-shot! I loved this story of Bella and Jasper. Great job!
Shawna chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Great story! Absolutely loved it!
AnnaKathlyn15 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
its cute and sweet. nice composition!
PoppyMay chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
That was cute! Thanks for writing! : )
Irene Moriarty chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Its nice to see them bond! ;)
Taru Galateia chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
1. I looked at him, my eyes clouded by confused.

2. I could feel a hand on my check, a thumb gently brushing my eyelids.

3. Sleep love, we all day tomorrow and I’ll be here with you all night.

1. Confused should be confusion.

2. Check should be cheek.

3. You forgot "have".

I noticed other things that could have been fixed but I'm getting tired of writing huge reviews for now and it's best for authors if they only take a little criticism from me as possible. XD

I love the story, by the way. I almost always end my reviews with a positive unless I'm still reading what all they've wrote so far. XD

Keep up the good work!

TG
FRK921 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
how cute!

xox to Jasper!
SunshineXRainbows chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I really like the story.
Jessie07 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Cute story!
FrozenBloom chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I want to thank you for writing that. It was a real look into the relationship between Bella and Jasper.
atypical-swan chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I enjoy these kinds of stories, where Bella and Jasper get to bond a bit - this was a very nice way to show them getting to spend some time together.
krizue chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
how cute!
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Nicely done, I really liked it. :) It is important that Bella and Jazz are friends. :)
angstsmoker chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
hi, that was a good one shot, cute and sweet.

loved how jazz and bella bonded through shoping, alice would be proud, lol.

thanks for writing
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