Reviews for Starved |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hate to see anybody drunk because I know (like Bella) anything could happen to her, or she could do something that would hurt someone else. What if she is now pregnant? What if she winds up with a sexual disease? What if she had decided to drive home? What if she had fell in the forest and hurt herself? She could bleed to death if she had tripped on something sharp. I am too tightly strung to take chances like that, and I worry about others when they loose their good judgement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there t really HEA and EDWARD AND BELLA. I mean the way she's thinking is giving me doubts... But Idk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh... Loved the Lois Lane line |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story now following! . Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there going to be more chapters posted? Really like this story and wants to see it to the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait is there more?! I just fund this story and I really really loveit, I really want to know how this all ends! I know its been years and you may not even get this review... but please finish it... and poor freaking Edward...seriously I want to cry for him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally loved ur way of writing. Also loving tiny bit variations u gave in the personality of few characters. Like Edward being strong abt Bella as to what she is doing wrong. Should hav been that way in the original story too. |
![]() ![]() Hehe the whole alien sent to earth after his planet was destroyed. My thoughts raced instantly to DBZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() why havent you posted more? ive read 40 chapters in less than 24 hours, and now there is no more? meanie oh and obviously i love the story! |
![]() ![]() Yeah, you're working on the next chapter. right. |
![]() ![]() I realy thing you did a good job at portraying reality. I like the fistey bella I personaly relate to it. You got an A from me |
![]() ![]() I loved jaspers car I thought it waz perfict! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like Jasper would have a girl car... |
![]() ![]() ![]() great storey I'm hooked please review soon i cant wait to see what you come up with next :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you still working on this? |