Reviews for As We Dance to the Beat of Your Heart
impartofthefandom chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
I love this!
JustAnotherAuthorDurping chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I think I just died a bit there, yup.

This story was just amazing. I love how intimate they were physically, though all the same they were bantery and in character and it was just lovely! The argument at the end was priceless as well. I don't think Toph would take Haru over Sokka. ;D

Great story! It is definately a favorite. I must go reread it again now.


Mark Handon chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Good story, nice idea, and solid writing. Just a few corrections:

1. Toph couldn't have possibly returned Ping's wink. She cannot see the wink.

2. In true Tokka fluff, Toph should have no trouble letting Sokka lead (personal opinion, please disregard)

3. I think it is a bit OOC for Toph to wear lipstick

That is all. Sorry for the personal opinion, I am much better at judging angst.
theoriginalmeathead chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
wow that was cute! nice work! a sequel would be great! :-D

The One And Only Lobster chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
This was kind of random but very cute. :D Also sexy.
Blanco Pagina chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
aw, I love it! That's so sweet!

Toph and Sokka are so cute together...oh, I CAN'T WAIT until you guys all see PolkaDotFeather's Katara/Ang's so fantastic! :)

but, yeah, this was awesome, hon! And your knowledge of dance is impeccable!

LOVIES AND BEAUTIFULLY SORE LIMBS (if you catch my drift...)

Solembum13 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wow! Great work!
A very odd fellow chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Ha, this brought back memories of my own ballroom dancing experience. I wonder how many other dancers "celebrated" successfully completing a series by getting punched in the stomach? It was a blast, though I'm definitely thankful my partner was a tiny Viet girl. Keep up the good work, it's always a pleasure reading your fics.
Super Reader chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wow. This was really cool. Sorry the collaboration fell through but it was nice for you to do something for Tokka Week anyway. :D