Reviews for Every Father's Sacrifice
myriah chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
it waz good i like the part were she talks about the bathroom and how it looks like pee
caramel008lovah chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Beautiful one shot. :)))
vampdreams chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
that is some deep kind of father- daughter time I say

i love those pick ups...cute post BD life

i love the ambiance of the scene!
Edwardlover chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Make a sequel please! This is a good story!

euphoricxdreamer chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Aww... Such a cute BD moment!

Loved it 3
Pigfarts7 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Very funny one about the eyes
JuiceBoxRiot chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
ok i just wanna say...i dont like renesmee. never have, never will. i hated that part of breaking dawn, which ruined it for me. i hate that the spotlight was taken from bella (and edward) and put on renesmee. twilight saga was supposed to be about bella right? I never read fanfics with Renesmee in them.

ANYWAY HAD TO SAY THAT but with THAT being said...I actually LOVED THIS. It was great. it made me smile and laugh and it was just great. So congrats to being the author of a story with renesmee (even the original breaking dawn by THE stephanie myer) that i actually liked. :)

loved it.
Justchillingandliving chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
awww i love it its so sweet
lovetoread19 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Omg priceless
AndYourPointIs chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I am all for the Edward/Bella pick up line one shot!:D
A.S Halo chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Wow it was so awsum i like it.
Dreamer'sSweetFantasies chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Please continue this.. it's awesome! haha :)
cinewardy chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
haaaaaaaaaa good story! i love it :) well done author!
crissee chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
This was such a cute one shot. I loved the Edward/Nessie moments which I wanted more of in Breaking Dawn. Her last line was especially good. Difinetly would like to read the more adult pick up lines Bella would use on Edward.
getvampy chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
That was adorable. I have no desire to have kids, but I love Edward as a daddy. Thanks for sharing.
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