|Reviews for Every Father's Sacrifice|
| penpaperaser chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I love it!
| Michelle62092 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
this was cute :)
| isacz chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
hahaha LOVE it! great idea! :);):)
| JoeBob1379 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
That was wonderful! I think the pick up lines were a very cute father/daughter bonding activity :)
And I loved BD, too- glad to hear I'm not the only one who's sick of the complaining, lol...
| simkid chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
yes continue the pick up line story
| urcoolcarrie chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
HA HA HA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! i'm still laughing! at one point i actually had to get up from my chair so that i wouldn't fall off and hurt myself. so funny. :)
please write a sequel! i am so putting you on my author alert list so that i will know when it shows up. :)
just to let you know, i loved breaking dawn as well. i refuse to listen to people who tell me that they hated it because it makes me sad that someone would feel that way.
| mayalucille chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
This was halarious! I love pick up lines, too. You should definitly take this idea and run with it at vampire speed!
| reaper-girl01 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
omg! the pee thing was hilarious.
this is great. i love it.
| dbg06 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
That was very funny. I loved all the pick up lines. I do hope you will write a sexy Edward/Bella pick up line story.
| modernxxmyth chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I want to hear the dirty pick up lines, damnit! Post a second chapter and/or sequel!
Pee? Really, Nessie? Haha.
| Ethyl The Pirates Daughter chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I would like to see a Bella/Edward continuation of this story, Romantical. This story was hillarious.
| danisu20 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
that was fantastic! i'm a huge fan of ridiculous pick up lines.
| padfootly chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I think I died from laughter. I tried to keep it in - but when I got to that last one, I fell over in my chair.
This was absolutely priceless. xD
| wordsaremyescape chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
just for the record. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED BD! GOTTA LOVE THE PICK UP LINES! loved father/daughter bonding activities. i could just picture the look on edward's face during some of those. especially when they came from nessie. i would love to see some lemonade if you end up making this a two-shot. that was so good!
| WeasleyWeakness chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
LOL! So cute. I loved this. I was chuckling before I even clicked on the alert link! I can't wait for the lemony sequel!