Reviews for Last Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mf, you did NOT just quoted Spider-Man... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh. Forceful hugging? You know your stuff seems alright if you keep it "in context" of the story, but picture it from the outside observer's point of view who has no inside access to personal conversations. "That old guy picked up some mudblood orphan to groom him for personal use" could be fitting description. Meh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this story very much. Learned a lot about WW2 history. |
![]() ![]() I love this fic... and then i see the last update date |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story, thanks for writing this. I hope you one day return to finish this, but even if not, I'm glad to have had the privilege of reading this. I enjoyed it very much. :) |
![]() ![]() A GREAT story. I hope you finish it one day. |
![]() ![]() This is a delightful story! Thank you for sharing it; I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you won't give up on finishing it someday when life lets you focus on it again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you come back to this, it's a novel idea and well executed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely brilliant! Love how you portray such complex characters like the father and son Dumbledore are and how you convey their minds and hearts. Is this abandoned? On hiatus? I'd love to read more, it is a masterpiece! |
![]() ![]() A truly brilliant work I must say. Congratulations for writing as much of it as you have. Superbly high quality writing with an interesting premise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really emotional |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a sad history, but I love the WWII facts you share with this. It makes it far more real then back in high school. |
![]() ![]() I like this already! Its so sweet and fluffy |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful story and I hope you come back to it one day |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like your story and hope that you might continue writing |