Reviews for The Honeymoon
jeonggukingdom chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
Hello, I'm sorry to reach out over this but this story has been stolen and reposted on Tumblr, I'm leaving you a link to the post where I explain what the user has done since your work is not the only one that has been re-posted.
Check: post/187028291669/plagiarized-content-alert
aj chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
This was really good. But I'm a little confused on why Jesse stopped eating suz out, girls can multiple orgasms. I would have knock my boyfriend out if he did that. Also guys can't have multple orgasms so it once the do their you know what won't really do much after because it goes soft
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Superb !
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Good
sweetsweeter chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
OMG~~ Seriously i had read fews good erotics shots but have to agree this was the hottest one..hehhe ufff it's hot in here...need some fresh air..hahah thanks for sharing :) and you keep it up..hahah
where she went chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Super hot.
where she went chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Super hot.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
brilliantly erotic
delilah chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
very nicely done ;) i thought it was really good but one little critism...you mentioned "juices" a little too much for my taste. The idea of him licking up her bodily fliuds isn't all that sexy :/
jadey1793 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
You change tenses in your sentenses.. like...it'll be in the past, then suddenly in the present.

Eg "He pulled himself up to sit on his legs and pulls her up with him" ...shoulda been 'pulled"

That is all :)

Nice work

x
allgirlsloveavampire chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
whooooooooooooooa that was soo steamy :)
TotallyTeamAlec chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
damn hot!
Conrii chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
boom chika wah wah
JonasCullenWifey chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Awww loved it
MediatorFan chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Omg please make this into an actual story, it was amazing, you should totally write for Mills and Boon or something
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