Reviews for The Visits
Stripy Gloves chapter 2 . 2/14/2009
I love this story, such a clever idea.

I thin that you've captured the essence of Edwards pain and i hope that you write lots, lots more of this story

for a pen-name how about something lyk: iluvedward or all4edward or 4evaedward or ihartedward etc.

or u could go totally different and go for :E4Eva etc.

tiny0fairy

xx
TeamVampire chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
AHAHAH! I'm sorry, but... well, what's wrong with Edward? AHAHAHA! He's acting like a hormonal teenage girl! Ahahahahh... Right from the start...

I opened the door with a bang, and put on what I sincerely hoped was a happy, cheerful voice. “Hello, family!” But then I felt a spasm of pain coming on, so I raced to my bedroom, and closed the door. She –I couldn’t think her name – wanted to be a part of this family!

AHAHAHH! Sad...
Infinite Rhapsody chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
This is great! Please continue! How about DazzleMe1901?
jn.v13 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
i like Edward's POV because he can read people's thoughts, but it might be nice to see the others'-like Alice and her visions of Bella and stuff. :)

i enjoyed reading it! :D
SpeakNow1118 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I like it.

I think you should do both.