Reviews for The Princess and The Teacher
Michiko165 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
aww I LOVE negixasuna pair , but I dont really like the ending ... umm , and I thought asuna is a lil bit OOC , but overall , I love the story! keep up the good work and make another negixasuna! :D
Sk8tingLemur chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Interesting if you only ran with it and actually made it into a story and not a one-shot. At the beginning of the story I got hooked for a bit until I got further. It was too rushed for something that sounding quite interesting. Also you might want to work on your wording in your stories in the future, it feels like your switching places from first person to third person and so forth, otherwise grammer is good and easily readible.

Interesting story, too bad it was only a chapter :(


Dragon-firefly1692 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
great job!