Reviews for The Mother
denismargot chapter 1 . 1/1
i wanna kill esme for this. she wouldn't do this
denismargot chapter 1 . 1/1
i wanna kill esme for this. she wouldn't do this
lizbethyellowrose chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
I enjoyed pondering your alternate ending. I've pictured such endings myself as well. But I think you portrayed Esme all wrong. She lost a baby, and I think this would be way out of character for her.
violin chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
It's 2014 now but i have to say it's amazing!
I hate renessme
JamieDidn'tDieInCulloden chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
A great story. Very well written.
BELAVERA chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I don't mean for this to sound like hate mail, but it was SO, SO WRONG TO insist that Esme kill the child AFTER IT NO LONGER THREATENED Bella! Esme would NEVER do that! I am so sad that Bella AND Edward's wishes ere so blatenly ignored. I don't see how the two of them could stay with Carlisle & Esme after that...
RedHann chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Aw, I love Esme. I feel so bad for Bella, Edward, and even Esme. I can understand why she did it. I mean, Renesmee was—unintentionally—killing her newest daughter.

Still love the story, though. Even if it is really sad.
Madilyn the Introvert chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Why'd you have to end it like that?
Carlisle060 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
you should feel bad for writing it as ESME was the bad person!

she too nice for this for her to do!


that was so mean!

but anyways ,

its was sad.

ScarletteVamp chapter 1 . 1/29/2009

I usually hate Esme, but I love her in this!

Renesmee sucks, and Bella gets on my lasst nerves.

Thank you. You should be a god for writing something as magnificent as this.
Izzabel chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Wow... That was... nice. I love what you did with this but... I don't know. It sure was interesting to read, thought.

There's only one thing I'm a bit confused with...

"The way Bella's pregnancy would have gone if an author who cared about the series had written it" - I believe it's a bit to harsh for you to say that... I'll agree to the fact that Breaking Dawn really isn't the best novel out of the four, but still... Stephenie Meyer really did a great job with the three previous ones, no?

What I mean is that, well, maybe you don't like BD, but I still think that what you said is a bit too much...

...But your story is great, I'll definatly give you that. Write more.
CoryMichael chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
How much hate mail are you getting right now? Can I read some of it? You should post that as stories, they would still be better than most of BD.
bug2001 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I, for one, loved Breaking Dawn, but this was definitely an interesting take. Great job!
vampirechick123 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
wow, i never thought a baby could destroy a family so much.

great job
The Wordless Epoch chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I don't get it ... "If written by an author who actually cared about the series"?

It's good ... I'm just mad confused ... -.-

Re: Author's note...

I ... I have no idea ...
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