Reviews for Missing Scenes of Perfection
NikiRadcliffe chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Love it.

I was so gonna do this myself.

is it ok if i do this too?

I wont copy your ideas )
mayalucille chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Very nice! You have once again proved my theory correct that everything you write is amazing


SurrepTRIXus chapter 1 . 8/8/2008

Not only is this full of the steamy sex we all love, but you have a really good grasp of the characters. Very well written. I can't wait to read more.
Sunflower33 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
You did fantastic. Similiar to how I would have imagined it. I expected Edward to be the perfect gentleman at least for their first time.
three.hills chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
This was a very sweet scene, absolutely perfect. Beautiful interpretation of the 'deleted' scene. I am so looking forward to more!
Bella's Bff chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
That was an awesome lemon! YOU ROCK! Can't wait for the next one!

Bella's Bff
Eillac chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Thank you :)

So much
GoodyGoody23 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Really, who hasn't gone back and reread all the almost-sex-scenes? Haha. It was very good. Please update soon. :)
Twilighter4ever chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I usually don't review smut but I had to this is perfect, Bravo! please continue!
sreader chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
That was def. my favorite version of that scene, I absolutely loved it and can't wait for the rest!
Tai Birdsong chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
That was bliss.
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