|Reviews for Missing Scenes of Perfection|
| twihard12341885 chapter 2 . 6/19/2010
omfg. that was soo arrousing! arrghh- i wish i was bella.
| principessa-della-mafia chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Wow. You're so awesome at this. I've read some of you're other stories. It's perfect i could actually see that happening in BD i wish she wrote it though but i guess it's okay now that you have written it.
| Tooonks chapter 2 . 5/16/2010
Wooow this was perfect! I loved it! I always wonder how was their fist night, and the second...
Oh, no! It's complete! I thought it would be fantastic if you wrote their third time, you know, on the following day.
But it's ok. We had our missing scenes. Better than ever!
| sweetmama77 chapter 2 . 3/26/2010
| sweetmama77 chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Aw, beautiful! So tender and loving. *sigh*
| colourfulchatterbox chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
I don't normally go for vampire sex scenes...but I do love this one :P I am never going to read Breaking Dawn without this story in my mind :)
| TwerdLife chapter 2 . 3/1/2010
can u plz put more on
plz u have good writting
the other ifcs iv read like this arnt that great
plz write more
| nitsuAPJ chapter 2 . 2/1/2010
Wait... what? Only two chapters? I thought you were going to do all of them? Please *puppy dog eyes*
| hersheycuddles chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
Lol Oh Edward, you never fail me
| trinity70x7 chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
I've read several BD "missing moments" and this was one of the better ones. You write from Edward's POV very well, many fanfic writers just don't seem to understand him. I think you do.
| WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 2 . 12/30/2009
| rebecca chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
The scences that you described was very fitting. Enough to keep you interested but not over the top. Well written. Thanks for expanding on Breaking Dawn where I felt needed more "fluff". Love your insight into Breaking Dawn and what you despised. Very Honest. Loved it.
| fanoftwilight chapter 2 . 12/15/2009
WOW! Just wow!
| moniquecullen chapter 2 . 12/13/2009
Wow...I loved that it was hot but not smutty. I loved his reaction to the bathing suit.
| youngandmature chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
What's the ripping noise and the feel of powderry soft?