Reviews for Basic Instinct
Icefire6 chapter 10 . 11/23/2013
Wow. This is brilliant. You took a premise that was a straight set-up for Hentai, and turned it into a genuinely heartwarming, romantic, and plausible story. Furthermore, it was really well-written: Perfect technically, every twist was well-enough foreshadowed to not be an asspull while not being obvious...

Normally, I hate shipping. Normally, I hate romance. But just this once, I loved this story.
Lazarus.357 chapter 10 . 11/20/2013
Excellent Job. You took it right to the edge and stopped, just as a "T" story should. And, hey, I personally would RATHER imagine what kind of intimacies Tedd and Grace were having. Tell you the truth, I've read too many people try to write porn, and it's a lot harder than it might seem.
This is probably one of the best fan fics I've ever read on this site...and I don't give that kind of praise easily.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Arcantos the Storyteller chapter 10 . 11/14/2011
Very nice story!

... Okay so I've only acautly read the last 2 chapters so far... but I'm sure the other chapters are gonna be pretty cool as well!
ArchAngelGundam chapter 10 . 7/20/2011
Good short story. This actualy could happen sometime down the road in EGS. Good work.
alatane chapter 10 . 5/8/2011
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 7 . 8/17/2010
Darn, no continuation? I like the depth you've added to Grace and Tedd here, and the storyline is captivating. It's a pity it hasn't been continued for so long. Thanks for the read though!
Markisreal chapter 7 . 8/9/2010
Uppdattee Plz

Good Story, The net lacks fanfics of webcomics
Corey chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
this wasn't a bad story, but i would like it more if it had been Grace's intimate feelings with Tedd... otherwise it just feels like i read a HUGE block of text for nothing...
Solan-Solaris chapter 7 . 6/8/2009
Very...interesting take on Shive's comic. Nicely written too. I do know this is a fanfiction site, but im curious at why you decided to make Grace, well, in heat. I can understand that she is half-squirrel, but she's also half-cat, half-Jeremy, and don't forget her Omega and Legion forms. Meh, ignore the mindless ramblings of a fellow writer. That being said, I like it. It goes hand in hand with the actual comic, with the characters being true to what Shive had originally intended them to be, not any out-of-character stuff that most writers put into thier fanfictions. I look forward to this story to updated further with more chapters. Im actually thinking about writing a ff about EGS myself. Anyway, may the deity of all things furry, random, and awesome smile upon your fanfiction and bless it with a lot of good reviews. Ciao!
Kintatsu chapter 7 . 2/4/2009
A certain Squirrel we all know and love is in heat, isn't she? I figure this because of a) Spring Break, b) her atypical behavior around males, and c) the dreams. Interesting plot-bunny, I must say. Keep writing.
SAmaster01 chapter 7 . 2/1/2009
I think this story is really good, the best EGS fic out there. I think you emulate the characters really well, I'd like to see what happens next. I'd also like to say that it's a good thing that someone finally pointed out some of the more physical relationship to Grace.
Kintatsu chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Ah, yes. The mating urges. Bring on the feral squirrel!