|Reviews for Faith And Violence|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/11
I thought it was a good detailed short story.
If a longer story of eda and rock being together could be written that would awesome.
But all and all I really like the story.
| COBRASTEVE chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I ALWAYS wanted Eda and Rock to get it on! It would make Revy crazy with jealousy! Very nice...
| Jacob.Uzumaki chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
loved it bro
| Deeonte chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Make more rock and eda lemons please appreciate it
| ThePhenakism chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Not very often i see a good Rock'x'Eda fic. Well done!
| Tales from the Lee chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Interesting story, though being honest I'm not the biggest fan of lemon one-shots. Too fast in my opinion. That being said, I really enjoyed this story. The Eda Rock ship is woefully underused which is somewhat ironic considering of the pairs of rock and revy and rock an Eda, Eda is the one who canonically shows blatant attraction to rock. But I do suppose Revy also has a canon interest in rock, it's just a bit more subtle.
I suppose I'm rambling though. So here's the honest critique. I liked it. While in general I'm not a big fan of super lemony stories, the Eda Rock pairing feels more appropriate with a degree of sex. I mean, face it Eda is one attractive lady and she's shown through not only he action but a lot of Revy's dialogue to be rather...easy.
Still I think you did a good job with the characters and maintained a believable degree of emotion through this. I would have likes to see this expanded upon more, but for a short sexy story I don't think you could go wrong here.
Plus your Battle Priest OC fit the bill perfectly. He shows up, talks a bit to establish an identity and then gets blown away by our heroes. That's how an OC should work. They don't take screen time from the real characters and the story doesn't focus on them for more than ten minutes. That kind of writing is so hard to come by on here that I'm happy to see that you do it right here.
If I had to rate this, I'd give it a 4.5/5 stars, only because it's short, sweet, does the job and all but does have minor flaws such as the AHHs and the brief plot point at the end. All in all, definitely recommended for fans of BL who want a kink.
| batosaix chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Man you should make this into a full length story that ends up with revy and eda both working for Rock completly.
| Meech Macko chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
More lengthy Rock Eda fics will be refreshing and exciting...
Wish there were more Rock Eda
| Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Oh...Revy gonna kill him when she finds out.
| BigT1587 chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
It started out really well. But by the time that you got to the Rock having two orgasms/being a virgin part, the story started getting unbelievable. It wasn't just that. The story took a different tone after that. It was like you were either trying too hard or playing it too anyway, good effort and I'll check out your other stories.
| meme chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
2 thigs what the how the rock and eda dose not look good togater I mean comeon you should just keep revy and rock how is the pair is it hansel and gretel?
| Jamez JRKnicklesyahoo.com chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
First off, another great Rock and one of the many fine women of Black Lagoon pair-ups. Loved this one, just as much as Poison's Price and especially the Inconceivable Couple series. My persoanl Rock/Revy story is Marriage of Chaos, simply because it ties into several other of your works, namely both the Assassin's & Brother's Keeper stories; even if its stopped presently at one chapter.
However, I not only write this review, praising your ingenious tales of unusual and incredibly entertaining stories. Most involving said salary man in Black Lagoon, but Shinji from Eva as well. But I write this, because from the BL seris, I think there should be a Rock/Balalaika lemon story as well. Which I feel would fit quite well with all other Rock finally hooks-up with a beauty from the series stories. What do you think?
| Guardian 777 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
another good BL lemon.
| JustMikeG22 chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
I really liked this story. Eda and Rock are a good couple just like Rock and Revy are. Rock must be a pimp banging all the hot women in Roanapur. I also agree with one of the other reviews that said you should get Revy pregnant and see how she reacts.
| C.B. Buchinsky chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Good story so far from what I see you've done Rock with Revy, Roberta, Shenhua and now Eda. Ever thought of trying Rock/Balalaika? or Rock/Fabiola?