Reviews for Wish
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
lovely sad...
Crazycally chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
sad... good work
Inari Mara chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
It's so simple and touching... I definitely love this fic. Thank you for it!
anticollision chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
ChikaMegumi chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
It's different, I like it.
shelwyn chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
The only thing I can think of to improve this is to start at a much higher number. Perhaps in the mid 800's or low 900's. That should add some emotional impact, a line about how long she's been at this would have given her more depth. Small things like that can improve a fic greatly.
Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
simple, lovely, and sad, i like it~
Black Lighted Clouds chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Oh...kay. Odd. Good.
I Spaz With Pizzazz chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
oh. wow.

this is a simple fic, yet so strongly striking...

i love it very much. :3

Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Sad, but beautiful. I like the idea of it, because this idea of the origami / paper-crane wishing has always appealed to me and the ideas that Konan has are interesting. Lovely work.
Kalliel chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
I've always loved the story of the thousand paper cranes. And even though the key to granting one's wishes should be a happy thing, an uplifting thing, perhaps the only reason those keys are sought is because it is already too late. I can't help but feel that every number is a countdown to tragedy, not wishes granted.

This fic has gotten me on a total Pein/Konan kick. Excellent read!


*adds to favorite stories*
Finnimbrun chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
This is a really nice fic. Short, spare, to the point, hauntingly lovely, and with that sense of inevitable doom and tragedy that I love about this pairing. I hope you write more in the future.