Reviews for Bella and Edward's Honeymoon!
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 3/15
What should of happened in breaking dawn
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
Realy nice ,I think I needs to show just a little more passion but it was very good
Guest chapter 2 . 1/1
Your really good
Guest chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
Really gd :) im JasmineFlower123 btw :) ill help ya with grammar xx
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
osm :D will add wen im logged on :)
Guest chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
I like it yet again! um I think you meant stared into his eyes not started but you CAN actually say that so ill let it slip!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I think its just perfect but bad when your brother walks into your room and you randomly close the website window! I was soo scared cuz he is really nosy but he just told me it was dinner thank god for that!

PS: maybe tone it done a little on the 'Edwaaaaaaard' thing ok? whatever!
AliCat chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
So long as you leave a disclaimer at the top of the page it should be fine. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
I really liked the whole" lion married the lamb" creative!
hagithara chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
jsjs..lol! of coarse it okay..i mean we already use their characters and settings why not a few of their words? i love it! i never thought of a fnfic with those scenes.. i kinda leave it to the imagination..jsjs -thara
coolsoccerplayer chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
well about your question if you could use chunk in the book i don't think so but it would be better if you don't
ligia-lorraine chapter 2 . 3/4/2011
You're such a great writer! This is exactly what I've been looking for. I definitely wished the book had gotten more R rated lol. I'm so glad you were able to do it without making the characters sound sluty, stupid, or totally riduculous. Amazing job, I really hope you don't stop there!
sarahlouise80 chapter 2 . 1/21/2011
love it update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
It's incredible, i love it. Too bad that i didn't know you earlier. Say, why don't you write the time they did when bella is a vampire, i'm sure it's gonna be wonderful
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Great
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