|Reviews for Bella and Edward's Honeymoon!|
| lizzie brooks chapter 1 . 6/7
have had some part on the beach on in the water
| Hopelesscatlover chapter 2 . 4/4/2016
I thought your story was really good and I wish there was more chapters. As far as grammer goes all Is should be capitilized.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
| jeangary28 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
What should of happened in breaking dawn
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Realy nice ,I think I needs to show just a little more passion but it was very good
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
Your really good
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
Really gd :) im JasmineFlower123 btw :) ill help ya with grammar xx
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
osm :D will add wen im logged on :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
I like it yet again! um I think you meant stared into his eyes not started but you CAN actually say that so ill let it slip!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
I think its just perfect but bad when your brother walks into your room and you randomly close the website window! I was soo scared cuz he is really nosy but he just told me it was dinner thank god for that!
PS: maybe tone it done a little on the 'Edwaaaaaaard' thing ok? whatever!
| AliCat chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
So long as you leave a disclaimer at the top of the page it should be fine. :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
I really liked the whole" lion married the lamb" creative!
| hagithara chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
jsjs..lol! of coarse it okay..i mean we already use their characters and settings why not a few of their words? i love it! i never thought of a fnfic with those scenes.. i kinda leave it to the imagination..jsjs -thara
| coolsoccerplayer chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
well about your question if you could use chunk in the book i don't think so but it would be better if you don't
| ligia-lorraine chapter 2 . 3/4/2011
You're such a great writer! This is exactly what I've been looking for. I definitely wished the book had gotten more R rated lol. I'm so glad you were able to do it without making the characters sound sluty, stupid, or totally riduculous. Amazing job, I really hope you don't stop there!