Reviews for In my hands
WatchYouWatchMe chapter 35 . 7/5/2010
This story moved WAY too fast and you really need to get yourself a beta that way your writing does not resemble my 10 year old sister!
florezita writer chapter 35 . 6/30/2010
oh my god.. i hate drama with all my heart but that's

because i have so much of it in my own life, and that's not

even funny...

but i dont know.. i like to read it because it gives me some

perspective.. or something..

and that way i dont know.. maybe

i dont feel so overwhelmed with my problems...

it was long.. but beautiful...

and u didnt focus on one problem at the time..

every chapter had its ups and downs...

so.. every story is really difficult to write,

i know and we, the readers, have it easy to just

read the story that u write.. i dont like when people

say nasty stuff about others people hard work..

i just like to say congrats.. on the drama :) jajaja

it was a beautiful story!
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 35 . 6/29/2010
I liked your creation of characters, and relationships that build between them. I thought it was very unique and I liked it. It was funny at times, dramatic and sad at others. Over all I thought you did a good job. Thanks for posting it for us to read! :D
Bianca3 chapter 12 . 6/22/2010
Congratulations, it officially the first person/author to make me cry with ur story/chapter, I'm loving t the story so far, I only hope that they do get their happily ever after in the end
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 35 . 6/18/2010
This was an incredible read...

I enjoyed it very much...

Thanks for writing!
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 34 . 6/18/2010
Love! Love! Love this chapter...
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 25 . 6/17/2010
Incredible read!

Loved the visit Carlisle so much...
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 19 . 6/15/2010
great chap! Love the focus on Ori...
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 17 . 6/15/2010
Uhh! Holy Shit! that was exhilarating!

Finally they got rid of him..
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 11 . 6/14/2010
Oh God! what a roller coaster
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 8 . 6/14/2010
So sweet!...
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 6 . 6/14/2010
Oh man..this was so sad to read...It needs a tissue warning..

They're everything the other needs and yet they can't have that one piece of happiness.
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Definitely a different take but I'm liking what I've read so far.

Sad that Carlisle is in this though..

E.C. B.S. huh? mmhmm...:)
susanliu chapter 7 . 5/29/2010
Amazingly well written, so sad, love the plot so far.

LOVE your writing style, everything flows perfectly and nothing seems rushed or dragging even though the story has developed quite quickly so far.

You are such a talented writer!
Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 35 . 4/25/2010
i so loved it! this was perfect!

a greatly written story!
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