Reviews for The Job is Never Done
ChaiGrl chapter 10 . 9/30/2008
Okay so it has taken me about two months to be able to write to you and once again parise you on your writing skills. There is just something about this specific world that I love so much. What I think it is, is that you found such a realistic way to show these aspects of the boys that we don't get to see in the show. The types of relationships that both the boys have with not only Kristine, but with Alex and Nicholas (they are to cute!) say so much about who they are. How Sam reacts to Kristine and Dean's relationship and how it helps Sam have this certain relationship with Kristine because of it. I am so curious to know "what happens next?" How do Sam and Kristine cope? Did they tell the boys? How will Dean come back in your world? I am just dying to know. As sad as that may seem. LOL.

I hope you continue on with this. It always makes my day just that much better. LOL.

Until then, take care and Happy Writing!
ROBINV chapter 10 . 8/18/2008
Oh, that was just marvelous! I loved every single word, paragraph, chapter!

I'm so glad that Sam kept his promise to go to Kristine after Dean's deal came due, and that things were working out for Alex and Nicholas.

As for Dean. . .wibble.

Love, Robin
fearlessgoddess2 chapter 10 . 8/16/2008
Great story! Sad last chapter, but I liked it!
Shannz chapter 7 . 8/16/2008
Dean finally gets his nookie :) Poor boy needed it I think.

It's nice that Dean feels comfortable enough in this familiar environment to open up a little. With Kristine and Sam.

I'm beginning to wonder how this will turn out for Nicky and Alex. Sounds like they will be haunted by the same kind of lifestyle Dean and Sam were.

As far as Ruby to the rescue - I can see it, but I still don't like her. Of course, she's a demon and I guess i'm not really meant to :)

I'm with Kristine. Not sure if I completely trust Tom or not. Hopefully we're both wrong.

Not sure when I'll get back. But will do so when I can. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

-shan
Dawn N chapter 10 . 8/16/2008
Well done :-) I enjoyed the story. I look forward to your next fic.
alwaysateen chapter 10 . 8/16/2008
Just got around to read your entire story... rough ending.

I love Dean's connections with the boys, very sweet, how they trust him and feel so safe around him. :)

Kristine is perfect for Dean, they understand each other completely and she's gonna be a good support for Sam now...
fearlessgoddess2 chapter 9 . 8/15/2008
I love it when Alex rolls his eyes and goes, "Dude, I'm 10." That's great. :) Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more!

Did you get a chance to read a few chapters of Blood Bath? I love getting critiques, especially from fellow writers. Thanks!
ROBINV chapter 8 . 8/15/2008
Ruby saves the day again! I know a lot of fans didn't like her, but I do. I'm glad the boys have a "little fallen angel" to get them out of deadly scrapes sometimes! And I think your story is superb! Love, Robin
ROBINV chapter 7 . 8/14/2008
Superb! You are really keeping me intrigued here, wondering about all the mysteries. The characterizations are spot on, and I love the little boys. MORE, MORE, MORE! SOON! Love, Robin
ChaiGrl chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Okay so I am sending you a review now because I meant to the day that you posted this chapter. I haven't been able to read any further yet do to read life getting in the way. I just wanted to tell you how excited I was that you are visiting this world that you have created. I love your characters and seeing how Dean and Sam are at ease for the most part. LOL. Thanks for posting so many chapters that I can't even get to then all at once. It will give me something to look forward to on my lunch break. I'll be sure to keep reviewing. Take care and Happy Writing!
fearlessgoddess2 chapter 7 . 8/13/2008
Loving Ruby's attitude, you got her right on. :) Keep up the great chapters!
fearlessgoddess2 chapter 6 . 8/13/2008
It's an interesting take on the vampires that they're actually affected by holy water and stakes. Nice chapter, keep it up!
Shannz chapter 5 . 8/12/2008
**She’d give anything just to spend the day in his arms and forget everything that was happening.**

Wouldn't we all :)

Got to admit - you've got me curious as to what's going on. I liked Ross. Sorry he's gone.

Great job creating your mystery here. I'm curious but not frustrated. The pace is perfect.

-shan
fearlessgoddess2 chapter 5 . 8/12/2008
Ross died? That sucks! Hey, I was thinking, I kind of have a story like this, called Blood Bath. It's 175 chapters (yea, I know!) and, at least in the beginning, it's about this girl, Christina, whose parents get killed by vampires and she starts developing powers and they realize that that's why the vampires wanted her. I'd love it if you could give me your opinion on it, at least the first few chapters, since I know it's really long! Thanks!

Karen
ROBINV chapter 5 . 8/12/2008
This story is excellent (like all your others). I adore Kristine as an ongoing character and love Alex and Nicholas. I read all five chapters in one sitting, couldn't put it down, LOL! Looking forward to more with great eagerness! Love, Robin
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