|Reviews for Continuing On|
| Ab chapter 11 . 12/9/2017
The characters in the story are complete idiots. The plot was cliche. Bella and edward are so insecure and have zero self confidence. Bella's insecure thoughts made my head hurt. You showed success to be something so easy in your story. I have only read 13 chapter and I can't continue reading it anymore. There is some good humor in your story, no doubt but at the same it the plot is bland and very unrealistic.
| Sk chapter 11 . 12/9/2017
The story so cliche.
| DanielleIAm chapter 3 . 4/11/2017
Douse? Douses? Ruff? Bight? I am so confused of these spellings. So very, very confused.
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 30 . 9/29/2016
Cute! Good work
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 7 . 9/28/2016
Ah, I normally skip author's notes but read the one at the top about your spelling. It's good that you acknowledge it and are doing your best to improv it! Good work on cultivating the story thus far.
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 4 . 9/28/2016
does, not douses
I'm going to assume english is not your first language. If so, good efforts so far!
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
Sign, not sine
| King BigClock chapter 26 . 4/6/2016
Fucking cliched mess this turned into.
The author flat out made all the problems in their relationship on Edward when it's obvious some of the things are Bella's fault.
The most blatant is, the author had Bella kick Edward out, and is not having bella say 'He left me'.
Get fucking real. Dropping this pile of garbo.
| King BigClock chapter 21 . 4/6/2016
Honestly, I'm starting to hate the twilight fandom, same shit over and over. Guy grovels all story, girls dates other dudes while claiming to love the guy, and so and so.
Get original pleb.
| bitchabell chapter 2 . 2/5/2016
its not sine, it's not ruff, how do you expect people to read with such blatant errors
| Guest chapter 32 . 10/29/2015
i agree d first chapter sucked ... thank god bella reduced her stupidity after that ... but .. I DIDNT TOLERATE UR DUMB SPELLING MISTAKES SO THAT YOU CAN LEAVE THE STORY INCOMPLETE . N U HAVE GUTS TO TAG THE STORY AS COMPLETE .
| E Cullen chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
I'm sure other readers have already mentioned this but I'm going to say it anyways - your writing needs a lot of reviewing on your part. The spelling mistakes are actually mood killers for me which is rather unfortunate because I really liked the summary and was looking forward to the story.
| Tam chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
I read a few chapters, and then stopped. The spelling is horrific, the plot too thin for words. I think we all normally try to identify with the main character. A "what would I do" type thing. Had he walked into my apartment, I would have laughed, mentioned karma and kicked him out in the street. She is such a doormat.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Sadly, I will not be continuing on. Fix this.
| MiccaF chapter 30 . 1/5/2015
Excellent story! Really enjoyed reading this, and will have to read again in the future :-) I look forward to reading more of your work!