Reviews for Continuing On
CloseAcct chapter 14 . 10/27/2009
well she did say she wanted someone to fight for her, and Edward is just giving up? Not a good sign...
CloseAcct chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
i hope i didn't offend you by my first response, however the spelling is getting so much better... anyway, im really loving this story, i was picked on in HS alot and so this is right up my alley! I even had fantasies about being a writer back in MS & HS. keep it up!
CloseAcct chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
okay im really sorry, the story is looking awesome but im not sure what sine is, im guessing sign but it was getting distracting... only thing i can suggest is not to depend too much on spell check? Other than that, i can't wait to keep reading!
Cathrinee chapter 5 . 10/26/2009
This is a really good story but there are so many typos. Im ripping my hair out.

"Why douse that matter?"

”Crap, I was lousing this argument."

Its spelled; Does. Losing. And is this the Lauren in the Twilight Saga, if it is, its Lauren, not Loren. But still a promising story. You should get a beta :-)
Bella Marie Cullen 213 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
4k101 chapter 18 . 10/17/2009
loeved it!
suckittt chapter 30 . 10/6/2009
I 3 this story! SO good!
LaLerin chapter 6 . 10/2/2009
loved the laser tag and britney ref! lmbo..never heard that before!
LaLerin chapter 2 . 10/1/2009
omg that was so sad..i had tears welling up in my eyes. Bastwards an ass!
sunsettwilight chapter 26 . 9/30/2009
HAHAHA...Loved this chappy, like i would have to expalin that the whole dinner/date/talking over each others shoulder and 4 drinks thrown at edward later scenario thing had me in histerics, gotta love the strong independant bella that can hold herself together enough to make edward pay for the crap he put on her. Your story has captured me right from the begining. Im going to be honest, the first few chapters took me a while to get through with some of the mistakes, but i have to give credit where credit is due, you addressed them and you where honest enough to know where your mistakes where and in all honesty, once i got through some of the errors i found that i was too engrossed in the story to give up on it. Iv loved it all the way through and havent been able to pull myself away from it. (two nights in a row iv gone to bed at 2am b/c i havent been able to stop reading, and tonight is already 12.20am and i doubt i will go to bed till iv finished the story, thank god its school holidays or i'd be a walking zombie)
robyntwilight16 chapter 30 . 9/28/2009
FANTASTIC! I loved it! Great job, but I'm sad there's no sequle :(

Well great gob anyway, it was awesome!
otaku876 chapter 14 . 9/28/2009
okay, i SO called that! i'm not even kidding. when they said she wouldn't have to go on another date til Febuary, i was like "Then it's *definitely* gonna be Jacob Black, and she'll wanna go out with him again." and when Eddie boy had his epiphanie, I'm like "Oh yeah, theres *no way* it won't be him." oh yeah! lol. poor guy.
ClancyJane chapter 30 . 9/19/2009
this is one of those special stories that hook you in till the end : )

I enjoyed reading this so so much - thanks for sharing !
Poison-Iby chapter 30 . 9/13/2009
awesome story can't believe its over!
GottaLoveFanFiction chapter 30 . 9/11/2009
Awesome story, had me laughing, in tears, and of course a wonderful ending. Thanks so much for writing it.
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